Group poem -

[kassi59]

I had a thought and wonder if It could work. Im wondering since there are so many talented people here - if we all could write a poem. Ill start and others can then add on line by line and see what we get...lol, if nobody adds on a line well, guess Ill have my answer!
One line apeice, you can add another line, but you cant add two at the same time, you have to wait for someone to respond first.


From which the embers flickers a flame,

[Girlonthehill]

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I had a thought and wonder if It could work. Im wondering since there are so many talented people here - if we all could write a poem. Ill start and others can then add on line by line and see what we get...lol, if nobody adds on a line well, guess Ill have my answer!
One line apeice, you can add another line, but you cant add two at the same time, you have to wait for someone to respond first.


From which the embers flickers a flame,

A memory, a face, a picture, a name?

[ddstiles]

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What he called love, she called a game,

[SChajin]

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And then she left to catch the train,

[VodaHost]

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becuase she thought it was going to rain.

[kassi59]

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The rain it came and from afar,

[limebrook1]

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Her shining knight drove up in a car

[SChajin]

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He said to her you ARE MY STAR,

[limebrook1]

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She said, dear sir, you're having a larf!

[kassi59]

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with a turn she smiled at him,

[VodaHost]

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and began to barf.

[royb]

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But the shining knight was a gallant chap

[Girlonthehill]

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And so wiped her gown with his flat cap.

[Lincslady]

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And remarked by eck lass its all down your lap!

[nick1346]

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Can I mop it with me bread bap!