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  • chriscross
    Sergeant

    • Oct 2006
    • 27

    Take a look at my site and tell me what you think.

    Hey,
    Take a look at my site and give me suggestions:

    Thanks
    Chris Cross
    http://www.chriscrossmt.com
  • Bethers
    Major General & Forum Moderator

    • Feb 2006
    • 5224

    #2
    Re: Take a look at my site and tell me what you think.

    Well, the page looks nice - but I have no idea who you are, what you do or why I'm there. There is nothing for se's to find you and send people to you - so if you don't need se traffic, that doesn't matter.

    There are also no meta tags for who you are - just a couple for Trust Worth Certificates - which really don't make you trust worthy in my mind :) Maybe that certificate is more well-known where you are.
    Beth
    A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

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    • chriscross
      Sergeant

      • Oct 2006
      • 27

      #3
      Re: Take a look at my site and tell me what you think.

      We are not a shop, thats why actually :)
      Chris Cross
      http://www.chriscrossmt.com

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      • Bethers
        Major General & Forum Moderator

        • Feb 2006
        • 5224

        #4
        Re: Take a look at my site and tell me what you think.

        I didn't think anything I said had anything to do with a shop - most websites aren't shops - but usually I can tell what they are or what they do from something on the website - and usually people have websites and want people to be able to find them in the se's if they are in that field.

        Your scrolling bar says click here for more information - but isn't clickable, either.
        Beth
        A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

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        • chriscross
          Sergeant

          • Oct 2006
          • 27

          #5
          Re: Take a look at my site and tell me what you think.

          Actually it is clickable, but a hand does not appear, it remains a text cursir, try clicking on it.
          I am sorry but what does se mean?
          Chris Cross
          http://www.chriscrossmt.com

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          • Bethers
            Major General & Forum Moderator

            • Feb 2006
            • 5224

            #6
            Re: Take a look at my site and tell me what you think.

            OK - I finally got your page to open - but I usually don't install the active x control for websites - now I got to another very fancy page - again it looks beautiful. But it isn't user friendly or se friendly - and you are building websites? I certainly would want mine to be se friendly. I couldn't get a couple of the areas to work without clicking and waiting - and I guess I'm impatient, cuz I would already be clicking on something else - then would have to close that to go back to try to see the other.

            Finally saw the About us blurb. You are very talented, as I said, this is very pretty - but I don't know how useful it is.

            Don't get me wrong - I think it's beautiful - but one thing I've learned over my years in business - is no matter what I like or how beautiful something is - I can't forget that it, first and foremost, has to be user friendly to it's core audience.

            SE = search engine
            Beth
            A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

            SEO and Marketing Tools
            SEO - The Basics

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            • chriscross
              Sergeant

              • Oct 2006
              • 27

              #7
              Re: Take a look at my site and tell me what you think.

              If you click on: What we do you'll know what we do. also it is explained who we are in About Us. People can find me by sending me emails, or phoning me, as shown in Contact Us.
              Chris Cross
              http://www.chriscrossmt.com

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              • chriscross
                Sergeant

                • Oct 2006
                • 27

                #8
                Re: Take a look at my site and tell me what you think.

                oh i see what you mean.. but in what ways can i arrange it?
                Chris Cross
                http://www.chriscrossmt.com

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                • Bethers
                  Major General & Forum Moderator

                  • Feb 2006
                  • 5224

                  #9
                  Re: Take a look at my site and tell me what you think.

                  I'm talking about people finding your website - it will never be found as it is - nothing about it is se friendly. People would have to know who you are and find you directly by using your url. And if you want to sell the products - chances are they'll never make it to those pages. You could optimize those pages for the se's - then they could send traffic directly to them
                  Beth
                  A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

                  SEO and Marketing Tools
                  SEO - The Basics

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                  • chriscross
                    Sergeant

                    • Oct 2006
                    • 27

                    #10
                    Re: Take a look at my site and tell me what you think.

                    Thanks for all your help, but i am a student, and at the moment don't have time to arrange it, I will keep everything you told me in mind, in the mean time what do you think about these sites:

                    Shanelty - Malta. Shop and buy office supplies, office equipment and office accessories. Original Ink Cartridges, toner cartridges, binders, shredders, computers, laptops and notebooks.
                    Chris Cross
                    http://www.chriscrossmt.com

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                    • Bethers
                      Major General & Forum Moderator

                      • Feb 2006
                      • 5224

                      #11
                      Re: Take a look at my site and tell me what you think.

                      Again they are not se friendly - will be a long time before any se's send traffic to the product pages, if ever.
                      Beth
                      A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

                      SEO and Marketing Tools
                      SEO - The Basics

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                      • chriscross
                        Sergeant

                        • Oct 2006
                        • 27

                        #12
                        Re: Take a look at my site and tell me what you think.

                        what do I have to do to make them se friendly?
                        Chris Cross
                        http://www.chriscrossmt.com

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                        • Karen Mac
                          General

                          • Apr 2006
                          • 8332

                          #13
                          Re: Take a look at my site and tell me what you think.

                          chris

                          Your flash is very nice, but your services wont sell OFF that page over the internet. If you wanted it as an example of what you can do, ok. Beth is right about the sellability part of it and driving traffic to it. If you had a brick and mortar or another site to actually do your selling, and use this as an example of your flash expertise, then it would work.

                          As a rule i dont download Active X controls as those are where those nasty viruses LIVE and ruin peoples computers. I only clicked cuz of your association with the form.

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                          • Mitai Adventures
                            Private

                            • Oct 2006
                            • 1

                            #14
                            Re: Take a look at my site and tell me what you think.

                            Originally posted by chriscross
                            Hey,
                            Take a look at my site and give me suggestions:

                            Thanks
                            I think that your sight is really unique and shows your character to be mysterious and awesome.

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                            • chriscross
                              Sergeant

                              • Oct 2006
                              • 27

                              #15
                              Re: Take a look at my site and tell me what you think.

                              I am starting to see your point, but my major disadvantage is I am in form 4, and in Malta we have extremely hard exams in form 5, and for every we've got around 14 subjects and each with a book over 200 pages to study, and we have to start and finish this year, so time isn't on my side, in fact I had to remove most of my advertisements to prevent more clients. I have already rejected 10 other clients this month including 3 major companies, and had to recommend them to other web design companies.
                              So to change the site at the moment it is quite impossible...
                              Chris Cross
                              http://www.chriscrossmt.com

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