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  • mrrapson
    Corporal

    • Mar 2006
    • 18

    Feedback Appreciated

    Hi PPL,

    I have recently changed my site and updated the look of it a lot
    would you all have a good look for me and et me know what you think?

    http://www.passionateforpresents.co.uk


    Many Thanks

    Leigh
  • bill2006
    Lieutenant General

    • May 2006
    • 3421

    #2
    Re: Feedback Appreciated

    Nice,
    -The message "Hit Reload On Your Browser ...site" doesn't serve any purpose for new users, might want to take it off.
    -Some of the titles on your NavBar are a bit long and overlap the logo.
    -Clicking on the image in gimaltwhisky2.html does not return user to home page.
    -Width set at 972 , no problem for me, but you might get a lot of recommendations to reduce to 800.
    -One more thing, the logo you have here is really nice, why not use it on your site too.


    Good luck !
    Bill
    www.blueearthtea.com
    www.ftaaconsulting.com
    www.iaval.com
    www.theemeraldbay.com

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    • naghosthunter
      Lieutenant Colonel

      • Aug 2006
      • 693

      #3
      Re: Feedback Appreciated

      I agree with bill2006 also take a look at your product A-Z as well.
      "Jim"

      Hillbilly Electronics LLC

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      • zigzag
        Captain

        • Apr 2006
        • 206

        #4
        Re: Feedback Appreciated

        I like your site. You have no doubt that it is a gift site, the pictures in the middle set the tone straight away.
        But your grey picture backgrounds are not positioned in straight lines. This, for me, is very offputting. I agree about the "reload" message. It doesn't seem to serve any purpose.
        A good marketing site.
        Regards
        Royden

        www.harrow-art.com
        www.harrow.co.za

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        • Bethers
          Major General & Forum Moderator

          • Feb 2006
          • 5224

          #5
          Re: Feedback Appreciated

          I certainly agree with Bill about the logo - why isn't that your header?

          Actually, I agree with everything he said :) - except I think the width of your site is just fine - specially with the right column - if someone with 800 comes along - they'll still see most everything.

          I would remove the Google search from your page - unless you can keep only the internal search part.

          I also suggest you rethink the product page titled "alcoholic gifts" - are these meant for alcoholics? lol - even Alcohol gifts would be better - but I think maybe Gifts of Liquor would be best - or along those lines. I certainly don't want you to lose sales cuz people think you are suggesting buying liquor for alcoholics. :)

          I recommend stores put their name, address and phone number in the footer of every page - gives more credibility and some people will call to ask a question if it's right there - and you can usually then get those orders.

          Some pages are centered and some are not - you'll want to check on that. ie - Gifts for Children isn't centered.

          You need to redo all your meta - the keywords are spamming - you want ONLY keywords associated with the page - and your description isn't good enough - you just put in the title. Titles also need to be more descriptive with the pages keywords included.

          All in all - the colors and site look really good - needs tweaking.
          Beth
          A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

          SEO and Marketing Tools
          SEO - The Basics

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          • Dream Lady
            Major General

            • Feb 2006
            • 2036

            #6
            Re: Feedback Appreciated

            Ditto for all of the above. I enjoyed your site and makes it inviting to buy from. Like Beth, I love your color combinations. Great job...a little more tweaking and it's perfect. Much success to you!
            Cindy Smentowski

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            • glenmike
              Master Sergeant

              • Aug 2006
              • 69

              #7
              Re: Feedback Appreciated

              Nice site, informative and pleasing catalog of products. Bill & Bethers pretty much nailed down the main stuff. The only negative impression I had has already been mentioned by Bethers... 'Alcoholic' could maybe replaced... the first thing I thought of was Foster Brooks. (Long past American comedian who specialized in inebriation routines.)

              That said, it looks like a winner!

              Poppi
              www.newmexicorides.com

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