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[Dream Lady]

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Dennis: For your 2nd day at this, you are doing GREAT! Much better than me on my 2nd day. I first had to figure out BV builder. Then all the terminology on how to publish was mind boggleing for me. So for your 2nd day...I'm impressed! Use the various forums provided by BV and if you want to, you will learn alot from all the experienced people here that volunteer their time to help us. Most of all HAVE FUN! Goodnight

Hi Beth: Yes, cool site. I have spent to much time playing tonight. That's ok, it's a learning experience for me as well.

[Bethers]

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Dennis, for a newbie on the 2nd day - you are way ahead of many. Be very proud of yourself.

I think you should have a page where you sell the machines - to anywhere - pricey doesn't matter if it's what someone wants - just don't call it pricey there - not good marketing :) - you can add a paypal button for it, sell it and the coffees - the other service can be local.

[naghosthunter]

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nice site specially for me a coffee drinker the only problem i seen was that your entire site is clickable that was very annoying that a little box on top left acted as if i wanted to save site as .... might be a glitch but no site should have the mouse acting like a hand getting ready to click to another link or place. work on that then it will be fantastico.

[Coffee.exp]

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Dream lady where exactly did you get that I love it, but all I want is to add The to the coffee experience. I don't know what is causing the clickable naghosthunter. I will play with it and see if i can fix it

[Bethers]

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Dennis,
You can play too -
www.cooltext.com
Realize, you select text, background colors, etc etc on each - so you can really have fun finding one that suits you.

[Bethers]

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Because your entire page is basically that picture - and the picture you made clickable to your home page - which is where it already is - that's why it seems as if the entire page is clickable. If you want that to be clickable, I'd make a page about the machine and tell more about it, with prices to buy it there.

Again, I think you'd be better off getting rid of that pic and doing the page in more text. - Cut out the pic of the coffee maker and put it in by itself.

[Dream Lady]

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Dennis: Playing around on that cool text site is fun. But if you want to know exactly what I did....
For Style: I used "Blended"
Then on the next page you type in your name, "The Coffee Experience"
Size: 70
For Text Color I used a gold color or I think you can type the number CCA60E
Start Color: Black or 131214
End Color: Dark Red or 5F0808
No Background color: FFFFF

Here it is with "THE" added in. If you want I can email the jpg image to you that I did here or I think you can just right click on your mouse and save the image as is.

[Bethers]

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Cindy,
What's even better about that - is I used the same blended one you just used for my A Child's Palace logo - but if you look at it, the difference is tremendous - you'd never know. With different texts and backgrounds and all the color variables - and it comes out so crisp and clean.

Dennis, I like it as she did it - but would compare it without using all caps also (although I don't consider caps in a logo to be shouting like in text). Or even doing it like "The COFFEE Experience" to emphasize coffee - again, it's easy to see it all the different ways.

I do like those colors - think that is really ***** for a coffee site.

[Dream Lady]

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Beth; Isn't that funny! I see the similiarites, but also very different. Have fun Dennis....the problem is, I spend to much time playing. I like Beth's idea about emphasizing COFFEE.

[Lincslady]

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Hi Dennis,

Your doing just great the colours you have chosen are very nice and I like the fact youve made a contrast colour in dark red ...nice ....youve had some great suggestions given above ..hope you dont mind me adding my little bit :o)...

Those coffee pictures are gorgeous and look very inviting and make you just want to taste one!...well it does me lol....so I would use them to take full advantage of people taste buds lol... and how about a dark chocolate coloured background.

Something like this http://www.lindashouseemporium.net/coffee.html

Cindy I used your logo but didnt know what font you used, sorry had to use a different one ...but its just an example

Keep tweaking Dennis your doing a grand job ....I want one of them coffees! ;o)

[LadyEye]

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It's looking good .... and I am not a coffee drinker, but looks inviting ...

On your second page of prices, you have some sideways scrolling, and I am just wondering why you may not offer on line purchasing?

Back to my tea .... lol :)

[Dream Lady]

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Hey Dennis...You're making changes!! Looking much better. I like your cooltext header you did! We should call this the "cooltext" thread! Great ideas Linda! Hey Dennis, just thought I would tell you that although I didn't care for your gold background when you had it...my husband looked at your site and he liked it! Ladyeye has a good point about online purchasing. Just goes to show you, in the end...it's about what makes you feel good about your site because you will get all different opinions and suggestions. Use the shopping cart method and take what appeals to you and leave the rest.

I'll keep checking back to see your progress!

[Coffee.exp]

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Yes I am making some changes hope it looks better, thought I would drop the back ground seems not to many like it. With friends and family they all were saying it made it hard to read. Now make it more se friendly and get a on line store started with paypal I may have something. I appreciate all your help and keep it comming you all certainly have agreat talent for this.

[glenmike]

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Looking good, Dennis! Much easier to read. I see that you will have online ordering at some point in the future. That's great, 'cause I will probably be a customer! The tweaking and fine tuning don't ever end. Your website is a dynamic structure and the model will change over time as you get to better know your Internet market.

Best Of Success!

Poppi
www.newmexicorides.com

[choco777]

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As far as the site ..I like it The above comments are valid, what I'm interested is the shipping price to me...I wanna buy, email me, off my site. Better machines than are offered here. The coffee is another story, I want to try it.