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  • Malcolm Mills
    Private First Class

    • Aug 2006
    • 8

    Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy

    Would you learned folks mind reviewing my site for quality and content? Not that it shows up or anything but I'm sure one day it will!

    Thanks people.



    Have a great day!
  • philipc9635
    Lieutenant Colonel

    • Jul 2006
    • 735

    #2
    Re: Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy

    Hey Malcolm

    Your Site is looking pretty good and the Nav Buttons all seem to work well. I would think about changing the Index button to a Home button

    I found the text in Red difficult to read as it is very glary. (My eye sight isn't the best) You might want to change your page width to 800 to fit into most browsers.

    Also I don't know if you resized your pics but the one on your home page took a while to load on my browser.

    But overall I got the message and the feel of your site. Looking good!!!

    All the best
    Phil Cartledge (Aussie Phil)

    Discover A Simple Approach To Online Business That Locks In Your Success.

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    • bill2006
      Lieutenant General

      • May 2006
      • 3421

      #3
      Re: Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy

      Nice work,
      You might want to title your home page something else other than 'index' and for presentation purposes use sentence Caps for title, looks more professional
      One of your links appears to be misdirected. Check "WIN Free Speaking Engagement" redirects to win free books.
      Use PixResizer to load a smaller pic.

      Good luck with your book.
      Bill
      www.blueearthtea.com
      www.ftaaconsulting.com
      www.iaval.com
      www.theemeraldbay.com

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      • jolie
        Sergeant

        • Aug 2006
        • 30

        #4
        Re: Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy

        Hi Malcolm,

        At the bottom of your home page the "book early" part in red is overlapping the rest of the text in my Browser - Mozilla. You may want to reposition it.

        I agree with above, your page needs to have your website name. i guess you know the drill, page properties- name page.

        Good luck!

        Jolie
        __________________________________________________ ____________
        http://www.eehomework.com

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        • naghosthunter
          Lieutenant Colonel

          • Aug 2006
          • 693

          #5
          Re: Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy

          hi malcolm you site looks good but the big bold letters malcolm mills needs to be brought down a tad it is overlapping your words on top other than that looks great.
          "Jim"

          Hillbilly Electronics LLC

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          • Bethers
            Major General & Forum Moderator

            • Feb 2006
            • 5224

            #6
            Re: Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy

            You need the titles for se's.

            Are you planning to sell the book via a link online? I highly recommend it - you'll lose lots of potential sales if you have them all email you.

            Very good start.
            Beth
            A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

            SEO and Marketing Tools
            SEO - The Basics

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            • choco777
              Brigadier General

              • Apr 2006
              • 1526

              #7
              Re: Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy

              Everthing that I noticed has been mentioned, except no overla[pping. The biggest tech. problem is the slow loading
              of the photo, maybe do as Bill mentions and resize, and name your pages, well, Bethers is right too. Good Luck
              Choco777
              www.mayatabasco.com


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              • MrCirrus
                Master Sergeant

                • Aug 2006
                • 66

                #8
                Re: Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy

                The red text at the top of the page, its not clear what the symbol between business and buyers is. It could be "&" but its not regognisable
                www.glidingcomp.com

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                • ez-ez
                  Special Status

                  • Mar 2006
                  • 1329

                  #9
                  Re: Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy

                  All the above comments make sense to me..
                  Over all, I really like the site and the content is great.. you'll do well.. for sure... Good luck.

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                  • Michael73
                    Sergeant

                    • Oct 2006
                    • 22

                    #10
                    Re: Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy

                    Hi ez-ez ! Whether you can help me with my form? I cannot already understand week in what my mistake! I have made the form on 4 pages - the last 3 pages work fine, but 1 page is lost - does not come on e-mail!
                    http://www.usinstallationservices.com/ it is my site, come on Windows (I while work only above it - allow to finish the god though it:)). I online all time mine ICQ 85-813-412 or Skype mine nik Michael Vinokurov. I see you now too in online. In thankful in advance! Mike
                    P.S. If you need to come on my server - let know!

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                    • naghosthunter
                      Lieutenant Colonel

                      • Aug 2006
                      • 693

                      #11
                      Re: Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy

                      malcolm this is what i was refereing to as over lapping...

                      Business & Buyers ... Making It All Work malcolm mills "Malcolm Mills" is overlapping with the word "work" work is slightly behind your name.
                      might be my settings on explorer i have it set to medium.
                      "Jim"

                      Hillbilly Electronics LLC

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                      • ez-ez
                        Special Status

                        • Mar 2006
                        • 1329

                        #12
                        Re: Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy

                        Hi Michael.. I can always have a look.. I need to see the form and the script you are using to process the form.. At this stage, your server login details are not necessary.. I am sorry about the delay in this but I just saw your post for the first time.

                        Please give me the url for the form page and I'll have a look. cheers mate.

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                        • Malcolm Mills
                          Private First Class

                          • Aug 2006
                          • 8

                          #13
                          Re: Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy

                          Hey Voda Volks,
                          You probably thought I was dead I was away so long. Don't tell me you didn't notice.

                          But now I'm back with a whole new set of problems. Ain't BV life grand?

                          I made the recomended changes to my Home page (including renaming it Home from Index) and the layout is much better. Thanks for everyone's input. Unfortunately all the other pages remember the Home page BEFORE the changes! I can't see where to fix it either.

                          I have tried removing Home from each button bar and re-entering it but to no avail. Help me Guru people. I all seemed so simple.

                          Question 2. Can you run out of pages in BCV? Is there a page limit?

                          Really appreciate your come back on this. I couldn't find a simlar case.
                          Best to you all.

                          Cheers

                          Malcolm

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                          • LadyEye
                            General & Forum Moderator

                            • Jun 2006
                            • 10526

                            #14
                            Re: Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy

                            No there is no limited to pages with blue voda ....

                            Not really sure what you are referring to with your home page problem ...

                            all the links appear to work, all go to the correct pages, or so I think

                            Just one suggestion ... your navigation bar is in a different spot on every page, it is really nice if it were in the same area on every page ....
                            You might consider changing that on your pages, just a suggestion though ...

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                            • asirimarco
                              Brigadier General

                              • Jun 2006
                              • 1208

                              #15
                              Re: Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy

                              hi Malcolm - I agree about the nav buttons - they are all over the place also some of your pages are not centered and some are wider than others
                              over all looks pretty good
                              Ann
                              www.MovingOn1.com - My Travel
                              www.BeadedCustomDesigns.com - Jewelry
                              www.FantasyManorArtStudio.com - Leather Art

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