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Re: Wanted: Your Kind Opinion - Go Easy
Hi Malcolm: Good Job on your site so far. Like Ladyeye, I don't see any problems. All your pages seem to link fine. So maybe you could explain a little more of what you think the problem is?
I would try and clean up the layout a little bit. It does seem to jump all over the place to me...and not just the navigation bars. The text needs a little more organization. You have a great book and product to sell. I just think the presentation needs to be a little more professional. If you are going to stay with the white background, I would change most of the text to black on all pages. Some of the pages have blue, some black, some a combination of blue, black, green and red. I would also look for a different font that is easier on the eyes. You have a nice book cover and I would also display that on your home page.
Just a few suggestions. Keep up the great work!
Hi Malcolm: Good Job on your site so far. Like Ladyeye, I don't see any problems. All your pages seem to link fine. So maybe you could explain a little more of what you think the problem is?
I would try and clean up the layout a little bit. It does seem to jump all over the place to me...and not just the navigation bars. The text needs a little more organization. You have a great book and product to sell. I just think the presentation needs to be a little more professional. If you are going to stay with the white background, I would change most of the text to black on all pages. Some of the pages have blue, some black, some a combination of blue, black, green and red. I would also look for a different font that is easier on the eyes. You have a nice book cover and I would also display that on your home page.
Just a few suggestions. Keep up the great work!
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