Feedback Please

[Machiavelli]

This site is my 2nd and hot on the heels of my 1st which I published a couple of days ago

www.myworldspanish.com

Is page size ok, as this was an issue before. Some pages are not complete yet but getting there.

All feedback and suggestions welcome

[Bethers]

Re: Feedback Please

Very very good.

You are a quick learner - have a good title and used the h1 tags. I'm very impressed.

Some will say you shouldn't go wider than 800 - but I'm fine with the width as you have it now.

Good job.

[Machiavelli]

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Thanks bethers, and thanks for your help before with the keyword etc... and real eye opener.

...standing on the shoulders of giants

[choco777]

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nicely done...liked the colors and the width is fine. The spanishcourses.html link does't work. Good Luck

[Machiavelli]

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Yeah the Spanish Courses is an affiliate program page i haven't finished yet, so should be working v soon

[bill2006]

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Lot of work and very quick.
-Pages seem to work fine.
-The logo needs some work, because of the dark red background, there is a fuzzy white edge around it. Use Paint.Net, PhotoShop, etc to save for the web or save with a transparent background. It will really stand out.
-Page: http://www.myworldspanish.com/spanishandtheworld.html, Spanish is actually spoken by close to 400 million people including Spain and the USA, and in over 25 countries.

Overall both your pages are very very nicely done.

[Machiavelli]

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I agree with you about the logo. The white around the writing etc.. But until now I did know how to remedy it as it was a free logo design software, and I was entering it as HTML

The Paint.net program is great. I think the logo looks a lot *****er now after a bit of tweaking.

[Pixel]

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I like how you have cloned the template for each page, the only thing i would say is you could have a slight variation in colour or outlay to let browsers know they have changed page?

[MrCirrus]

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Nice clear site. The titles across the top look like they should be links. Your cantact page could be made a mailto link

[bill2006]

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...think the logo looks a lot *****er now after a bit of tweaking.

Big improvement, looks ***** now. Try doing the same for the globe.