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  • Dory
    Sergeant

    • Oct 2006
    • 34

    Updated Please let me know your comments

    Hi guys,

    I've altered my site slightly please tell me if it's any better, and let me know if i have the keywords right, I have also changed the page names.

    Many Thanks
    Rachel
    capturedeleganceonline.com
  • Marincky
    General

    • Apr 2006
    • 4539

    #2
    Re: Updated Please let me know your comments

    Very nicely laid out, simple, to the point, colourful and very appealing. Nice work.
    Ramsey
    Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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    • Bethers
      Major General & Forum Moderator

      • Feb 2006
      • 5224

      #3
      Re: Updated Please let me know your comments

      I like the changes. As a new site you can get away with changing your names, but be careful of doing that as the se's spider and index you - as they will still have the old names in their database.

      I also do not like that all your page names are almost the same. Each page needs to have it's own keywords - which then allows you to bring people in for different keywords and keyword phrases. If you use the same on every page, you'll be asking the se's to decide which page is really the one that deals with that and you'll be competing with yourself with them.

      I'm sure there are other phrases and words that you could target to get traffic. And while the dash is great - you really don't want really long page names if you can avoid them. Just my two cents.
      Beth
      A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

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      • Karen Mac
        General

        • Apr 2006
        • 8332

        #4
        Re: Updated Please let me know your comments

        Dory,

        I agree with Beth, and, If you are going to sell prints, just load give them the option of buying the print and buying the card. I wouldnt waste time contacting you, id want to buy it. I would suggest just adding them to your cart!

        Karen

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        • Julie S.
          First Lieutenant

          • Oct 2005
          • 159

          #5
          Re: Updated Please let me know your comments

          I love your photos! =)

          I like your site... but, in my opinion, you really should keep your page width at 800. To me it just looks too wide. Plus, if someone has an 800x600 monitor setting (as many people still do), they have to scroll from side to side... and that's a bit of a bother.

          Otherwise... nice! =)
          www.hanalynn.com

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          • bill2006
            Lieutenant General

            • May 2006
            • 3421

            #6
            Re: Updated Please let me know your comments

            Well Done !!
            Bill
            www.blueearthtea.com
            www.ftaaconsulting.com
            www.iaval.com
            www.theemeraldbay.com

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            • Hester
              Captain

              • Jun 2006
              • 206

              #7
              Re: Updated Please let me know your comments

              Your site looks very nice! I love the way you have the pictures/gallery laid out. The front page is nicely set up with the pictures/mouse-over pictures. :) I like that stuff!

              I don't think I ever got to see your old site so I can't really compare. I love the photos!
              George
              www.virtuosocreative.com

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              • Dory
                Sergeant

                • Oct 2006
                • 34

                #8
                Re: Updated Please let me know your comments

                Thank you for your kind comments and useful suggestions, It's a work in progress and i imagine it will take a while to get it right if it can ever be right.

                Many Thanks Rachel
                capturedeleganceonline.com

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                • ez-ez
                  Special Status

                  • Mar 2006
                  • 1329

                  #9
                  Re: Updated Please let me know your comments

                  I agree with all the above... and from an average person's point of view, I love your site Dory.. it really has a unique feel and it's neatly done.. I don't go all techno when I view sites.. I just play the ordinary Jo Blow who has no idea.. and from that position, I think you are a top web designer.

                  All the best.

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                  • asirimarco
                    Brigadier General

                    • Jun 2006
                    • 1208

                    #10
                    Re: Updated Please let me know your comments

                    very nice and easy to use site. do you make the paper and designs on the cards too? ann
                    Ann
                    www.MovingOn1.com - My Travel
                    www.BeadedCustomDesigns.com - Jewelry
                    www.FantasyManorArtStudio.com - Leather Art

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                    • naghosthunter
                      Lieutenant Colonel

                      • Aug 2006
                      • 693

                      #11
                      Re: Updated Please let me know your comments

                      much better your getting the hang of things :)
                      "Jim"

                      Hillbilly Electronics LLC

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