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Re: Half way, input please.
You're on the right track, but a long road ahead.
You need to reword many of the phrases and slogans you present further, as they are too close to the original "inspirations" (legally).
You have again made your "Policy" into some hybrid flag for no apparent logical purpose: Change your perspective and your section from "Legal Documents" to simply "Policy" and see if you can see the actual important matter rise to the top instead of personal dictate.
Were I you, I would create a clear distinction between Services and Products, as again you are blending the concepts and it appears as disconjunctive navigation (unexplained emphasis). Why not simply have a "Services" and a "Products" sections grouped and cognizantly presented???? If this is too close to the previous dual-natured website design with unclear purposes, then consider a "Portfolio" concept & section...put your aqua specs there, and move the "offering" to a commercial site altoghether....
Although the layout is improved, it needs quite a lot of refinement with attention to details....alignment, finished edges, margins, etc. And, you should re-think how to present (you have less than 15 seconds for each new visitor) your true emphasis: is it your services, your focus on innovation, or your own "accomplishments" that you are using in attempt to impress others? If the latter, then you may not grow past this severely limiting perspective to effect the changes necessary....
IMO
You're on the right track, but a long road ahead.
You need to reword many of the phrases and slogans you present further, as they are too close to the original "inspirations" (legally).
You have again made your "Policy" into some hybrid flag for no apparent logical purpose: Change your perspective and your section from "Legal Documents" to simply "Policy" and see if you can see the actual important matter rise to the top instead of personal dictate.
Were I you, I would create a clear distinction between Services and Products, as again you are blending the concepts and it appears as disconjunctive navigation (unexplained emphasis). Why not simply have a "Services" and a "Products" sections grouped and cognizantly presented???? If this is too close to the previous dual-natured website design with unclear purposes, then consider a "Portfolio" concept & section...put your aqua specs there, and move the "offering" to a commercial site altoghether....
Although the layout is improved, it needs quite a lot of refinement with attention to details....alignment, finished edges, margins, etc. And, you should re-think how to present (you have less than 15 seconds for each new visitor) your true emphasis: is it your services, your focus on innovation, or your own "accomplishments" that you are using in attempt to impress others? If the latter, then you may not grow past this severely limiting perspective to effect the changes necessary....
IMO
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