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  • foxyandhunter
    Private First Class

    • Feb 2006
    • 7

    Hello all

    Well firstly i have worked in bv for a while and have shifted myself over to play around with Dream weaver and to date the site has a launch it will probably be tweaked many times over but this is it
    Please be aware that this site is adult content and is strictly for over 18's only so please observe this if you are under age or offended by adult material do not go there but if you are ok with it i could also do with feedback
    the site is not just a main stream porn site it is amature content and it is a personal site

    thanks guys
    Foxy & Hunter is an adult orientated website that requires viewers to be over 18 years of age and complies with U.S.C 2257 so if you look please be sure you are of legal age to do so and are not offended by adult based material
  • Scribbler59
    Sergeant

    • Nov 2006
    • 23

    #2
    Re: Hello all

    Hi,

    First, overall I think your website looks good. I like the index page -- a nice design. Now to specifics:

    - I am personally not a big fan of "comic sans serif" which I think is the font that you've chosen to use. I think it tends to look sort of childish, but this is probably just a question of personal taste.
    - on your home page there are a few odd spacings between lines. Maybe consider keeping the line spacing the same in the paragraph that's in white.
    - Oh, I liked the "spaces are tight" ... a "nice" play on words.
    - I don't think the photo you've chosen for your home page is the best -- I'm pretty sure you could find better amongst your collection of photos.
    - The link to "Serious Naughtiness" on the home page doesn't work.
    - Your entry to the members section is nicely done. The photo on each of the categories of photos is just large enough to "titillate".
    - The Gallery's great. I like the album generator you used. The photos aren't of "professional quality", but they're still very good -- and that "good quality, non-professional look" is actually kind of cool. There's one photo that needs to be rotated.
    - I find it a little odd that your sub-head is "Independent Escorts and Content Providers" ... maybe keep it as independent escorts and keep the content provider part as a link? (and note the spelling it's "independENT" -- "ant" is the French spelling -- and it's "Providers" -- without the apostrophe.)
    - And you might want to run a quick spell and grammar check, there are some misc. things.
    - oh and you might want to resize the photo of "Hawk" on the right side of his page. It got stretched and it's kind of scary -- and I believe he's a good looking guy!
    - I didn't go through your other sections as they seem to still be mostly under construction.

    By your main site looks very good!

    Hope this is helpful

    Cheers,
    Scribbler59
    Scribbler59
    Alias: Corinne
    www.projectgreatestgift.com

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    • naghosthunter
      Lieutenant Colonel

      • Aug 2006
      • 693

      #3
      Re: Hello all

      well can't see link to view so cannot make a comment.
      "Jim"

      Hillbilly Electronics LLC

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      • VodaHost
        General & Forum Administrator

        • Mar 2005
        • 12356

        #4
        Re: Hello all

        Originally posted by Scribbler59
        Hi,

        First, overall I think your website looks good. I like the index page -- a nice design. Now to specifics:

        - I am personally not a big fan of "comic sans serif" which I think is the font that you've chosen to use. I think it tends to look sort of childish, but this is probably just a question of personal taste.
        - on your home page there are a few odd spacings between lines. Maybe consider keeping the line spacing the same in the paragraph that's in white.
        - Oh, I liked the "spaces are tight" ... a "nice" play on words.
        - I don't think the photo you've chosen for your home page is the best -- I'm pretty sure you could find better amongst your collection of photos.
        - The link to "Serious Naughtiness" on the home page doesn't work.
        - Your entry to the members section is nicely done. The photo on each of the categories of photos is just large enough to "titillate".
        - The Gallery's great. I like the album generator you used. The photos aren't of "professional quality", but they're still very good -- and that "good quality, non-professional look" is actually kind of cool. There's one photo that needs to be rotated.
        - I find it a little odd that your sub-head is "Independent Escorts and Content Providers" ... maybe keep it as independent escorts and keep the content provider part as a link? (and note the spelling it's "independENT" -- "ant" is the French spelling -- and it's "Providers" -- without the apostrophe.)
        - And you might want to run a quick spell and grammar check, there are some misc. things.
        - oh and you might want to resize the photo of "Hawk" on the right side of his page. It got stretched and it's kind of scary -- and I believe he's a good looking guy!
        - I didn't go through your other sections as they seem to still be mostly under construction.

        By your main site looks very good!

        Hope this is helpful

        Cheers,
        Scribbler59
        How can you write such a in depth review, this person did not provide a link to his/her site? You must be very gifted.

        VodaHost

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        • LadyEye
          General & Forum Moderator

          • Jun 2006
          • 10526

          #5
          Re: Hello all

          lol voda host ... the link to her site is in her profile .... you can find it there ...

          I agree, scribbler gave a very good lengthy review ... I believe she knows her stuff

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          • Scribbler59
            Sergeant

            • Nov 2006
            • 23

            #6
            Re: Hello all

            Vodahost. "Gifted." Hm. Thank you. Except the only thing I've been gifted with is lots of hair -- thank goodness since I've ripped 1/2 out of out doing dumb things with my website.

            Ladyeye's correct, I just sneaked a peak at her profile.

            Cheers,
            Scribbler59
            Alias: Corinne
            www.projectgreatestgift.com

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            • LadyEye
              General & Forum Moderator

              • Jun 2006
              • 10526

              #7
              Re: Hello all

              I think you have done very well with your website and couldn't find anything wrong, scribblers gave you a great review and I'd take her word for it ... good luck to you, you know what you have sells!!

              VodaHost

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              • VodaHost
                General & Forum Administrator

                • Mar 2005
                • 12356

                #8
                Re: Hello all

                Sorry...I should known to check the profile...(silly me) The "gifted comment" was due to the fact that you gave an EXCELLENT review to a site that did not have any visible link....I actually went back and read the first post 3 times looking for a link and thinking i was going blind or something...

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                • Bethers
                  Major General & Forum Moderator

                  • Feb 2006
                  • 5224

                  #9
                  Re: Hello all

                  I just glanced - but first thing I noticed was a misspelling that's also in your above post - amateur - not amature.

                  The page titles need to be utilized to describe the page people are on, also.
                  Beth
                  A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

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                  • foxyandhunter
                    Private First Class

                    • Feb 2006
                    • 7

                    #10
                    Re: Hello all

                    Thanks for some very good words all,

                    i will get my spell checker going lol but at least we wasnt slated totally so we are all big smiles guys ta
                    Foxy & Hunter is an adult orientated website that requires viewers to be over 18 years of age and complies with U.S.C 2257 so if you look please be sure you are of legal age to do so and are not offended by adult based material

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                    • naghosthunter
                      Lieutenant Colonel

                      • Aug 2006
                      • 693

                      #11
                      Re: Hello all

                      aye me too voda me too.not on gifted, but on link in profile. :)
                      "Jim"

                      Hillbilly Electronics LLC

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