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  • keeptrack
    Sergeant First Class

    • Dec 2006
    • 50

    Need Some Feedback

    Hi to all

    Well I'm new to building websites and for the past few months on and off I've been busy building my VH/BV website. In 2007 I am hoping to really make a go at my company and I will like to use my website a one of the main marketing tools.

    If you'll be so kind to review www.keeptrackconcierge.com and give some feedback and/or review, it will be appreciated.

    Thanks ever so much
    Regards,

    Nicole Delamore
    website: www.keeptrackconcierge.com
  • SChajin
    Major General

    • Jan 2006
    • 2792

    #2
    Re: Need Some Feedback

    I may be having a moment, but where do you show how much you charge.
    Sharon Chajin

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    • Bethers
      Major General & Forum Moderator

      • Feb 2006
      • 5224

      #3
      Re: Need Some Feedback

      As well as no pricing - you have a sign up page that you'll charge people for without them knowing what any of the packages included - let alone cost. Every one of those packages needs a page with complete details (as well as price) of what it entails and specifically what area you cover. Are you going to run errands for me in Alabama, USA???

      You need to do major search engine optimization work - which will start with changing all your page titles and descriptions.

      I think you have a very viable business idea here - but you need to make the website work for you and the sooner you have it up with all the information and optimized - the better off you will be in 2007 when you are ready for it. It does take time to get the traffic.
      Beth
      A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

      SEO and Marketing Tools
      SEO - The Basics

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      • clanffa
        First Lieutenant

        • Nov 2006
        • 179

        #4
        Re: Need Some Feedback

        good work, nice site, readable text and buttons!
        Ill grade your site as an A
        Clan FFA-Halo 2 MLG, Machinima, and Glitch Clan
        http://www.ffaproam.com/

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        • keeptrack
          Sergeant First Class

          • Dec 2006
          • 50

          #5
          Re: Need Some Feedback

          Hi

          First let may say thank you for all of your feed back to-date and for the grade A from (clanffa)

          With regards to the price, the dillema is to show or not to show the price; some concierge companies show there prices and the others don't and therefore I chose for the latter. Upon your feedback I will look into this matter seriously.

          It is my goal to service persons in Holland, but also persons planning to come over to Europe (mainly Holland) and need assistance (those are the international customers). I will look at my wording to make it clearer.

          (Bethers), regarding the search engine optimization, how does that work and where should I start?
          Regards,

          Nicole Delamore
          website: www.keeptrackconcierge.com

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          • clanffa
            First Lieutenant

            • Nov 2006
            • 179

            #6
            Re: Need Some Feedback

            well, your welcome lol!
            Clan FFA-Halo 2 MLG, Machinima, and Glitch Clan
            http://www.ffaproam.com/

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            • sameer
              Second Lieutenant

              • May 2006
              • 106

              #7
              Re: Need Some Feedback

              ok, first things first, i am a designer and have to comment design wise.

              ur concept is good, but the front page, u have made a quite large table. u will c what i mean if you change ur screen resolution to 1024 or in 800. other pages are fine. and yes, u have not mention ur total membership fees.

              else is fine.
              nhugu.com - We are professional solution providers to facilitate in your corporate, business, official and personal presence in the web.

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              • keeptrack
                Sergeant First Class

                • Dec 2006
                • 50

                #8
                Re: Need Some Feedback

                Originally posted by sameer
                ok, first things first, i am a designer and have to comment design wise.

                ur concept is good, but the front page, u have made a quite large table. u will c what i mean if you change ur screen resolution to 1024 or in 800. other pages are fine. and yes, u have not mention ur total membership fees.

                else is fine.
                Thank you for the tip Sameer....

                I've changed the resolution and hope this has caused the front page to look better.
                Regards,

                Nicole Delamore
                website: www.keeptrackconcierge.com

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                • Bethers
                  Major General & Forum Moderator

                  • Feb 2006
                  • 5224

                  #9
                  Re: Need Some Feedback

                  Take a look here for some Beginning SEO tips then ask questions if you need to.

                  As to the pricing - you can't ask people to sign up for something you're charging them for without it. If you don't want to put your charges there - then don't have the sign-up and basically you're saying you simply want people to call for services.

                  If you want to take advantage of the fact that people online will sign up directly from your site- then you have to have prices. And much more detailed information.
                  Beth
                  A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

                  SEO and Marketing Tools
                  SEO - The Basics

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                  • keeptrack
                    Sergeant First Class

                    • Dec 2006
                    • 50

                    #10
                    Re: Need Some Feedback

                    Originally posted by Bethers
                    Take a look here for some Beginning SEO tips then ask questions if you need to.

                    As to the pricing - you can't ask people to sign up for something you're charging them for without it. If you don't want to put your charges there - then don't have the sign-up and basically you're saying you simply want people to call for services.

                    If you want to take advantage of the fact that people online will sign up directly from your site- then you have to have prices. And much more detailed information.
                    Hi Bethers

                    Thank you for the SEO tips, I've printed out and will read it tonight. With regards to the extra details, I changed the services page abit to read 'click on the services for more details' I have a feeling people were not pressing on the links to find out more about the services themselves.

                    Regardig the prices I will figure a way to show them.

                    Once again thanks for all the advice you've provided
                    Regards,

                    Nicole Delamore
                    website: www.keeptrackconcierge.com

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                    • Bethers
                      Major General & Forum Moderator

                      • Feb 2006
                      • 5224

                      #11
                      Re: Need Some Feedback

                      I did click on the services pages - the information there was not enough for me to know what was in the packages that you are trying to get people to sign up for - You need those packages specifically detailed.

                      I didn't have any trouble finding the info.
                      Beth
                      A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

                      SEO and Marketing Tools
                      SEO - The Basics

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                      • choco777
                        Brigadier General

                        • Apr 2006
                        • 1526

                        #12
                        Re: Need Some Feedback

                        Went ofve site and can only say that I ditto the above and best advice is to listen to Bethers. You cannot just try to work in the prices...if you can't I have some work here in Mexico for you, as you site looks now you do alot of great things for nothing.
                        Choco777
                        www.mayatabasco.com


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                        • keeptrack
                          Sergeant First Class

                          • Dec 2006
                          • 50

                          #13
                          Re: Need Some Feedback

                          Originally posted by choco777
                          Went ofve site and can only say that I ditto the above and best advice is to listen to Bethers. You cannot just try to work in the prices...if you can't I have some work here in Mexico for you, as you site looks now you do alot of great things for nothing.
                          Hi Choco777

                          I guess if you put it that way ....(doing alot for nothing), I'll get started and add that price page right away.
                          Regards,

                          Nicole Delamore
                          website: www.keeptrackconcierge.com

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                          • sameer
                            Second Lieutenant

                            • May 2006
                            • 106

                            #14
                            Re: Need Some Feedback

                            hey cool, the resolution problem is sorted.

                            ;)
                            nhugu.com - We are professional solution providers to facilitate in your corporate, business, official and personal presence in the web.

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                            • keeptrack
                              Sergeant First Class

                              • Dec 2006
                              • 50

                              #15
                              Re: Need Some Feedback

                              Hi all

                              I've made some changes to the front page and was wondering if you would take a look. I am hoping the page is finally centered and I also put the full name of the company at the top and put the fonts in the buttons smaller.

                              Much thanks
                              Regards,

                              Nicole Delamore
                              website: www.keeptrackconcierge.com

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