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  • keeptrack
    Sergeant First Class

    • Dec 2006
    • 50

    #16
    Re: Need Some Feedback

    Originally posted by Bethers
    I did click on the services pages - the information there was not enough for me to know what was in the packages that you are trying to get people to sign up for - You need those packages specifically detailed.

    I didn't have any trouble finding the info.
    Bethers

    Thank you for the SEO reader, I still have to figure out somethings, but I am positive once the changes are made I will have a site meant for 'the vistitor'

    Kind regards,
    Regards,

    Nicole Delamore
    website: www.keeptrackconcierge.com

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    • Vasili
      Moderator

      • Mar 2006
      • 14683

      #17
      Re: Need Some Feedback

      Did you see my comments in your "other" thread??
      . VodaWebs....Luxury Group
      * Success Is Potential Realized *

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      • wiggytuftuk
        Second Lieutenant

        • Jan 2006
        • 146

        #18
        Re: Need Some Feedback

        Hi Nicole,
        Firstly,nice music.The site is looking very good and will be improved more after following the tips given by the team.Best of luck with your efforts.
        regards
        Jay
        www.orlandomouseworld.com

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        • keeptrack
          Sergeant First Class

          • Dec 2006
          • 50

          #19
          Re: Need Some Feedback

          Hi once again

          With all the great information and tips I got, I've done some upgrades to the website. Regarding the content I still need to do some more work on that but in all things are coming alone a lot better than before.

          Please let me know what you think!

          Thanx
          Regards,

          Nicole Delamore
          website: www.keeptrackconcierge.com

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          • keeptrack
            Sergeant First Class

            • Dec 2006
            • 50

            #20
            Re: Need Some Feedback

            Over the past days I've taken on board a lot of advice and made some significant changes.

            Hope you can once again look at the site and give your comments.

            Thanx once again
            Regards,

            Nicole Delamore
            website: www.keeptrackconcierge.com

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            • SChajin
              Major General

              • Jan 2006
              • 2792

              #21
              Re: Need Some Feedback

              Looking Good
              Sharon Chajin

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              • bill2006
                Lieutenant General

                • May 2006
                • 3421

                #22
                Re: Need Some Feedback

                Nicole,
                Good work, some tweaking is in order:
                -Looks like you squeezed the Voda logo by sizing from the corners, use PixResizer for a better output.
                -Some of your pages are off center.
                -Seems you are using a logo on a few pages but not on your home page. A logo can lend identity and provide the elegance your services provide.

                Good luck.
                Bill
                www.blueearthtea.com
                www.ftaaconsulting.com
                www.iaval.com
                www.theemeraldbay.com

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                • keeptrack
                  Sergeant First Class

                  • Dec 2006
                  • 50

                  #23
                  Re: Need Some Feedback

                  Originally posted by bill2006
                  Nicole,
                  Good work, some tweaking is in order:
                  -Looks like you squeezed the Voda logo by sizing from the corners, use PixResizer for a better output.
                  -Some of your pages are off center.
                  -Seems you are using a logo on a few pages but not on your home page. A logo can lend identity and provide the elegance your services provide.

                  Good luck.
                  Hi Bill

                  Thanks for the tips and I will definately take them on board!
                  Regards,

                  Nicole Delamore
                  website: www.keeptrackconcierge.com

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                  • Bethers
                    Major General & Forum Moderator

                    • Feb 2006
                    • 5224

                    #24
                    Re: Need Some Feedback

                    On the prices page you haven't got links back to your other pages.

                    Also, you really need the home page and some of the other pages to say exactly what region/area you cover.
                    Beth
                    A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

                    SEO and Marketing Tools
                    SEO - The Basics

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                    • keeptrack
                      Sergeant First Class

                      • Dec 2006
                      • 50

                      #25
                      Re: Need Some Feedback

                      What a week it has been!

                      I started out with a website that had a good feel, but was quite lacking a lot of necessary information for the site to be effective. With all of your input I was able to take it to another level, one I am proud of.

                      From centering the pages, making the site more SEO, adding a logo, price page, going to www.widexl.com to findout how effective the site was ... etc I once again invite you to visit my website and give feedback.

                      Once again thanks to all
                      Regards,

                      Nicole Delamore
                      website: www.keeptrackconcierge.com

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                      • keeptrack
                        Sergeant First Class

                        • Dec 2006
                        • 50

                        #26
                        Re: Made some changes - Please give feed back

                        Hi to all

                        Happy New Year

                        Hope everyone is having success with their VH websites.

                        I have made some updates to my website and will like to get your feed back on:

                        A. Is the layout ok
                        B. Is the flow of the site working well
                        C. Can you navigate properly throughout the site

                        Please feel free to add any other comments you may have.

                        Much thanks
                        Regards,

                        Nicole Delamore
                        website: www.keeptrackconcierge.com

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                        • earningscoach
                          Sergeant

                          • Nov 2006
                          • 39

                          #27
                          Re: Need Some Feedback

                          Hi,

                          I have a few comments on your site. I would have to say that the black background around your service links draw away from the professionalism you are projecting (in my opinion).

                          Also, is it possible to line create a fixed postion for your link buttons? They seem to shift after leaving the home page. I for one actualy change the position of my link bottons from the home page but that is due to design layout. As you can see the change is dramatic and clearly intentional. The shift I noticed between your pages comes across as mis-alignment again a small issue that is betraying your professional service.

                          Lastly, I love the design of your banner rotation on your affiliate page, however several of your graphics are pixelated or streched. Also, this page requires the user to scroll horizontaly and from what I have learned this is the "holy grail" of no'no's.

                          I hope this infomation is helpful to you and does not seem overly critical. Just trying to assist you in making that "first impression".

                          Regards,
                          EC
                          www.EarningsCoach.com
                          www.SmartMove.biz

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                          • keeptrack
                            Sergeant First Class

                            • Dec 2006
                            • 50

                            #28
                            Re: Need Some Feedback

                            Originally posted by earningscoach
                            Hi,

                            I have a few comments on your site. I would have to say that the black background around your service links draw away from the professionalism you are projecting (in my opinion).

                            Also, is it possible to line create a fixed postion for your link buttons? They seem to shift after leaving the home page. I for one actualy change the position of my link bottons from the home page but that is due to design layout. As you can see the change is dramatic and clearly intentional. The shift I noticed between your pages comes across as mis-alignment again a small issue that is betraying your professional service.

                            Lastly, I love the design of your banner rotation on your affiliate page, however several of your graphics are pixelated or streched. Also, this page requires the user to scroll horizontaly and from what I have learned this is the "holy grail" of no'no's.

                            I hope this infomation is helpful to you and does not seem overly critical. Just trying to assist you in making that "first impression".

                            Regards,
                            EC
                            Good day Earningcoach

                            Thanks for the feedback! I also didn't like the back ground so much on the service page, but before I didn't think many persons would recognize that they could click on the four services. I've changed it back and see how things will work out.

                            About the affiliate page thanks for the tip, it took me some time, but I believe the scroll is gone or atleast that is what shows on my computer. Also I've changed some of the pictures, especially those that showed to be overly stretched.

                            Lastly the link button, you are correct they do not align with the Homepage as the two templates are different. Unfortunately if I change anything they entire layout will have to be changed. The if the door was not there on the Homepage I would have moved the links!

                            Overall your comments were not overly critical and I was able to utilize them well.
                            Regards,

                            Nicole Delamore
                            website: www.keeptrackconcierge.com

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