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  • warwickplates
    Sergeant

    • Feb 2006
    • 30

    Please review me

    A simple page, but do take a look. any feedback would be useful.

    www.timeforsales.co.uk
  • Bethers
    Major General & Forum Moderator

    • Feb 2006
    • 5224

    #2
    Re: increase your sales

    Just a comment - all caps is considered shouting - your entire home page is in caps - it works for emphasis here and there - like bolding - but not for all text.

    Also, the lighter blue text is harder to read - and you need some variables - all the boxes look the same - nothing to bring my eye to one or another.

    I'd like to see some sort of header - and some headlines on the page. The page itself needs to either be aligned to the far left of the screen or centered on the screen - not haphazard in between :)

    Good start - I look forward to seeing where you go with it.
    Beth
    A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

    SEO and Marketing Tools
    SEO - The Basics

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    • bill2006
      Lieutenant General

      • May 2006
      • 3421

      #3
      Re: increase your sales

      Wow, that page took forever to load.
      Agree with Bethers, very hard to read.
      Bill
      www.blueearthtea.com
      www.ftaaconsulting.com
      www.iaval.com
      www.theemeraldbay.com

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      • sameer
        Second Lieutenant

        • May 2006
        • 106

        #4
        Re: Please review me

        i couldn't agree more with bethers.

        DO NOT USE ALL CAPS EVERYWHERE IN UR WEBSITE.

        NEVER.
        nhugu.com - We are professional solution providers to facilitate in your corporate, business, official and personal presence in the web.

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        • sameer
          Second Lieutenant

          • May 2006
          • 106

          #5
          Re: Please review me

          but yeah, ur have a good design layout.

          :)
          nhugu.com - We are professional solution providers to facilitate in your corporate, business, official and personal presence in the web.

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          • naghosthunter
            Lieutenant Colonel

            • Aug 2006
            • 693

            #6
            Re: Please review me

            Yup take the advise from beth she knows what she talking about trust me she and the rest helped me on my ghost hunters site .
            "Jim"

            Hillbilly Electronics LLC

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            • SChajin
              Major General

              • Jan 2006
              • 2792

              #7
              Re: Please review me

              Listen to Beth
              Sharon Chajin

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              • warwickplates
                Sergeant

                • Feb 2006
                • 30

                #8
                Re: Please review me

                Hi everyone thanks for the info. Yep not sure why I did the whole site in upper case. I have made some changes, and am playing around with the rest. Not sure why it took so long to load, or why the page is off centre, as it looked and loaded ok on my PC, but I will look into it. Thanks again.

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