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  • scubadiver
    Lieutenant Colonel

    • Aug 2006
    • 553

    My website is finished

    Aloha, I have finished my website. I would appreciate any feedback from you and of course any suggestions you may have. David helped me get it up and I learned a lot on connecting every thing to paypal. Beth is testing the system and I am waiting for my first sale. I am so excited that this, it has been a long time coming, since August this year. Thanks so much for your feedback!
    www.hawaiionyourown.com
  • bill2006
    Lieutenant General

    • May 2006
    • 3421

    #2
    Re: My website is finished

    Nice,
    The 1st button of the NavBar on this page doesn't show (only a red x) the link does work.
    Consider alt text to you NavBar.
    On some of your pictures you have used that (annoying) "pirate" code but not on all pages/images. A watermark is much more elegant and accomplishes the same.

    Good luck
    Bill
    www.blueearthtea.com
    www.ftaaconsulting.com
    www.iaval.com
    www.theemeraldbay.com

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    • SChajin
      Major General

      • Jan 2006
      • 2792

      #3
      Re: My website is finished

      There is something weird going on with your contact page. Looks good though.
      Sharon Chajin

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      • mark89
        Sergeant

        • May 2006
        • 35

        #4
        Re: My website is finished

        Hi Scubadiver
        Your website looking very nice well done. The only thing is your contact page thar need to be fix.

        Marcos
        Thank you
        Maggie's Enterprise
        Maggie's Gift Shop

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        • Karen Mac
          General

          • Apr 2006
          • 8332

          #5
          Re: My website is finished

          CiCi
          Looks like you have somehow added a frame to your gif thats blank, and making that grey flash on your contact page and your navigation totally is absent from your buy now page. Might want to fix those as well.

          Karen

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          • Vasili
            Moderator

            • Mar 2006
            • 14683

            #6
            Re: My website is finished

            I am happy to see such a refinement in your overall web design....from your original layouts and schemes to this simplified and crisp presentation, your work has paid off grandly!

            There is still somewhat of a mis-registration from page-to-page (most likely from your width Properties being different: from clicking/placements outside original page widths?), but that is easily corrected.

            Congratulations, CiCi! You should be quite proud.
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            • choco777
              Brigadier General

              • Apr 2006
              • 1526

              #7
              Re: My website is finished

              Nice looking, you have come a long ways.
              Choco777
              www.mayatabasco.com


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              • scubadiver
                Lieutenant Colonel

                • Aug 2006
                • 553

                #8
                Re: My website is finished

                I think all bugs have been worked out. I appreciate all your feedback.
                www.hawaiionyourown.com

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                • LadyEye
                  General & Forum Moderator

                  • Jun 2006
                  • 10526

                  #9
                  Re: My website is finished

                  Your site is beautiful, just as it should look ....

                  From this page http://www.hawaiionyourown.com/travel-tips.html

                  your buy it now link is not working ..... check that

                  Just one other suggestion, on that very same page ....

                  can you make your links to the tips, fuschia in color, to match instead of the blue .....

                  I love your header .... goes awesome with "Hawaii on your own" .... looks secluded and gives the look and feel for "On Your Own"

                  Bravo to you!!

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                  • bill2006
                    Lieutenant General

                    • May 2006
                    • 3421

                    #10
                    Re: My website is finished

                    Good job!

                    One tiny thing, its not significant, in the contact page, there's a punctuation mark "period" in the comment box.
                    Bill
                    www.blueearthtea.com
                    www.ftaaconsulting.com
                    www.iaval.com
                    www.theemeraldbay.com

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                    • scubadiver
                      Lieutenant Colonel

                      • Aug 2006
                      • 553

                      #11
                      Re: My website is finished

                      Ah, got it!
                      www.hawaiionyourown.com

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                      • Bethers
                        Major General & Forum Moderator

                        • Feb 2006
                        • 5224

                        #12
                        Re: My website is finished

                        CiCi - isn't it exciting to have your baby ready for the world???
                        Beth
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                        • davidundalicia
                          General

                          • Mar 2006
                          • 6294

                          #13
                          Re: My website is finished

                          Scubadiver and Bill:

                          The punctuation mark catches whether the client has filled out that field or not.
                          The same form is also used for the survey page and both send the data to the same database.
                          So now the database can tell the difference between the 2 forms.........
                          Have fun
                          Regards..... David

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                          • scubadiver
                            Lieutenant Colonel

                            • Aug 2006
                            • 553

                            #14
                            Re: My website is finished

                            Thank you so much! This is all so exciting to have my own business in such a large playing field as the Internet. As far as my research shows, I am the only one doing this for Hawaii. There is one person with similar info giving it for free but in a different format. My ebook serves a different purpose I think. We'll see if the public thinks so, too.
                            www.hawaiionyourown.com

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                            • circuspet.com
                              Brigadier General

                              • Feb 2006
                              • 1104

                              #15
                              Re: My website is finished

                              Scubadiver:

                              Ya gotta know bra der is no finich in web building. Looking good.

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