1st try please comment

[www.crossroadsinvestments]

If anybody could take a look, and tell me where to go to get help. This was my first try, and it looked alright in BV, but not the same online. I know the form box doesn't send an E-mail and i am really confused about the php thing, ofcourse that was late last nite.
Thanks for any feed back that is given.

Mike

P.S. The site is www.crossroadsinvestments.net

[larazovich]

Re: 1st try and confused

Hi Mike
I am not good at forms or php either, but Ithere are lots of people on this forum who are, so you will get help soon.
Meanwhile, your page has a good start. But you might want to make ie narrower; limit the width to 800, so the largest number of people can view it without having to scroll sideways, which people generally hate.
You can do this by going to page properties and adjusting the number to 800. Length really doesn't matter, as people sort of expect to scroll down. While you are there you will want to click the box that says 'center in browser' to make sure the page stays in the middle of anybody's screen.
Not much, but I hope it helps,

[planet777]

Re: 1st try and confused

Hi Mike,

cant really help with the techie stuff since I have just created my own site (!!) but I think the site looks fine. I just think it might need a bit more elements, maybe it looks a bit sparse? also watch for the typo "comming" - it's "coming".

also Title the page - good for search engines too or so I understand - go to BV, right click on an area that is NOT actual copy - words you have composed - click on Page Properties, then General then Title. Otherwise it comes up as Untitled. You might put in "Real Estate Investor" and a few other key words.

hope this helps, hang in there m8!

cheers

will

[www.crossroadsinvestments]

Re: 1st try and confused

Hi and Thanks for the thoughts so far. I know it's a little thin on meat, I'm building this for my mother-in-law, and it's all I could get for now. I am going to look at some other sites and get some more pics and the likes.
Does any one know which forum talks about the text on the left side not being centered, as it looks in BV Builder?
Thanks
Mike

[naghosthunter]

Re: 1st try and confused

crossroads investments is overlapping the top border site needs a lot of tweaking you might want to remove name and comment from the box seeing how you have it on the left side you might want to get daves email form it can be used as the same thing you have now and looks much better as well.

[www.crossroadsinvestments]

Re: 1st try and confused

Where can I get the e-mail form? I have looked for the php form in the forum on e-mails but can't see it, maybe if I put on my glasses. I will be tweaking tonite.
Thanks

mike

[naghosthunter]

Re: 1st try and confused

lol heres a direct link to his page you will see the download now but you will need a phpeditor to make some changes it is very easy

http://youandmelinkup.info/forms/

[www.crossroadsinvestments]

Re: 1st try and confused

I tried daves e-mail page and thetutorial to do the contact page, and I actually got it to work, once I fixed all my fat finger mistakes. That step by step worked great, I only got lost a few times. I think I have fixed most of the major problems. If any body wants to take a look, and tell me what else I haven't fixed.

Thanks again for all the help.
Mike

[SChajin]

Re: 1st try and confused

Hi Mike,

It looks like your contact page works....congrats. I would like to see your little phone call box cleaned up some.
Your getting there....Good job for a new one

[sameer]

Re: 1st try and confused

hey buddy,u've got a good start, but i've one suggestion, plz try not using too much bright colors which take away the attention of ur site rather than focusing on the main content.colors, try playing with other colors as wellcheers myte.

[choco777]

Re: 1st try please comment

Looks good. Is that all there is a contact page? I tried the form and recieved a message that I would be attend to but it showed as an error page. Might be since many people will not give their phone number until after intial contact has been made. The images appear abit stretched shold resize them, I would think. Good job so far.