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  • Dondol
    Private First Class

    • Jan 2007
    • 7

    Tell me what you think!

    Hi everyone, I'm new to the forum although I've been with Voda Host for a couple of months now. Please give my site a look see and tell me what you think.
    www.AN2K.com

    Thank you,
    Dondol
  • bill2006
    Lieutenant General

    • May 2006
    • 3421

    #2
    Re: Tell me what you think!

    Nice, the picture says a lot.
    -Work the NavBar, some of the text is too long. One way is too shorten it to say "Scope" or "Agreement" and use an alt text when users roll over the menus.
    -Title your page, example "Home Inspections - A Need To Know"
    -Make all the external links open in a new window, don't lose your visitors.

    Good luck !
    Bill
    www.blueearthtea.com
    www.ftaaconsulting.com
    www.iaval.com
    www.theemeraldbay.com

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    • Dondol
      Private First Class

      • Jan 2007
      • 7

      #3
      Re: Tell me what you think!

      Bill,
      Thanks for the review, I'll work on those ideas.
      Dondol

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      • planet777
        First Lieutenant

        • Dec 2006
        • 181

        #4
        Re: Tell me what you think!

        Dondol,

        I liked your site! I had an instant gut feel on it, it looked nice and even tho I didnt go to any of the links :) the home page looked good and made me feel +ve towards you and your service.

        Just watch typos - "maby's" is "maybe's"...

        I didnt really like the artwork of the Sherlock Holme's guy... maybe get some better artwork or leave that area blank?

        But I think generally it's good and you are onto a good thing,

        cheers

        Will
        A manual to help small-business owners . http://www.entrepreneurshipz.com

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        • SChajin
          Major General

          • Jan 2006
          • 2792

          #5
          Re: Tell me what you think!

          Dondol,

          I agree with the above, check your links and work on the nav buttons.

          Good luck
          Sharon Chajin

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          • naghosthunter
            Lieutenant Colonel

            • Aug 2006
            • 693

            #6
            Re: Tell me what you think!

            yeppers nav buttons text too long agree with bill on agreement, scopes .
            "Jim"

            Hillbilly Electronics LLC

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            • Bethers
              Major General & Forum Moderator

              • Feb 2006
              • 5224

              #7
              Re: Tell me what you think!

              I agree with all the above - and you must get to work on your SEO (search engine optimization) starting with page titles as also mentioned above.
              Beth
              A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

              SEO and Marketing Tools
              SEO - The Basics

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              • Dondol
                Private First Class

                • Jan 2007
                • 7

                #8
                Re: Tell me what you think!

                Thanks to all, I've shortened the nav buttons and fixed the typo (I,ve read that page over and over and did not see it). Also did some SEO, much better.

                Again, Thanks,
                Dondol
                www.AN2k.com

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                • LadyEye
                  General & Forum Moderator

                  • Jun 2006
                  • 10526

                  #9
                  Re: Tell me what you think!

                  Looking good, the home inspection link is broken from a couple pages, I think due to the capital H in your typing of the link .....

                  I'd fix the typing over your nav bars, reduce the font type, the words are outside of the designated area ....

                  I was taken aback by the photo that opened on your home page .... I thought it was me ... lol .... my grandma had a doll house in her back yard, I was about the same age, and it really took me back a few years when I saw that .... thanks for bringing those memories back .... wow

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                  • moviemedic
                    Sergeant Major

                    • Jun 2006
                    • 94

                    #10
                    Re: Tell me what you think!

                    Your site look very nice. I like the picture on the home page. I noticed that some of your linked pages are not titled. This is very important for search engines and also when people bookmark your pages.
                    Great work and good luck to you.
                    moviemedic
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                    flyingkittenmusic.com

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                    • larazovich
                      General

                      • Jul 2006
                      • 5811

                      #11
                      Re: Tell me what you think!

                      Like the site, clean, will echo some thing above, broken links, etc.
                      Also, what geographical area do you service?
                      That would be useful to know right up front. I don't recognise the area code, so I am assuming you don't cover the San Francisco Bay Area..
                      Anyways, is nice, Good Luck
                      Liz
                      www.sebastopolparty.com
                      www.raynordescendents.com

                      Ring the bells that still can ring

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                      • scubadiver
                        Lieutenant Colonel

                        • Aug 2006
                        • 553

                        #12
                        Re: Tell me what you think!

                        Your site will have a professional feel to it after you make the above changes. The word crawlspacet is misspelled. (no t) Good job.
                        www.hawaiionyourown.com

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                        • choco777
                          Brigadier General

                          • Apr 2006
                          • 1526

                          #13
                          Re: Tell me what you think!

                          Agree with most of the above...The colors is what I didn't like. All in all a good job, keep tweaking and it should serve you well.
                          Choco777
                          www.mayatabasco.com


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