feedback needing

[osama0sh]

hi all
Please give me some feedback so that I could improve my website
this is nonegovermential web site for previnition of disaster and war impacts please help me to improve this web site www.mubadroon.org

Thanks ever so much

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osama0sh
www.mubadroon.org

hi
Please can u check out my site and comment
www.mubairoon.org
please i need our advice

ohh im very sorry this
www.mubadiroon.org

hi
Please can u check out my site and comment
www.mubadiroon.org
please i need our advice

[Dori]

Re: feedback needing

Good morning....
I haven't even made it past the intro yet! On your first intro please change 'well come' to Welcome.
More to come!

[Dori]

Re: feedback needing

Okay... made it past the intro...
You need to center all of your pages in page properties. One page is set to the left margin, another to the right margin.

Also, on your forms you have English translations, and throughout your site there are a few English headers, but the rest is in your native language. If you want this to appeal to English speaking visitors as well as visitors in your native tongue you need to have English translations for everything. Other than that... you are doing really well.

[bill2006]

Re: feedback needing

Good work and a worthy cause.

Consider:
-Grammar and spelling check. "We hope you spent good time" should be eliminated. Also, spacing, dates April20, 2005 should be April 20, 2005
-Center your pages. Pages Properties.
-Title your pages, use something other than your URL; an example could be "Humanitarian Aid Sudan - www.yourdomain.com
-Consider opening to a page where users can choose their preferred language. At first glance, I missed "English"
-In the Organizations page, consider using two different color fonts for your language and English, this will make it easier to read.

[osama0sh]

Re: feedback needing

HI dori
im very thank for your reply .
i will do all thing that you say, what about intro it is important ?
i have the link to english language upper
please mor feed ........

[osama0sh]

Re: feedback needing

hi bill2006
Major General
IM thank thank thank you but ineed mor feed please...
how can icenter my page i use programm (web page maker)
please help me for mor adivice..............

[naghosthunter]

Re: feedback needing

well looks good but after viewing your sourse i saw this <meta name="generator" content="Web Page Maker (unregistered version)">

so therefore if your site was created by useing bluevoda it would look like this.

<META name="GENERATOR" content="Created by BlueVoda">

so i cant give too much praise.

[Dori]

Re: feedback needing

I wish I could help with the Web Page Maker but don't know it. I thought you were creating your site with BV. Your best bet would be contacting WPM support and asking them.
Good luck