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  • abang_uda
    Corporal

    • Oct 2006
    • 17

    Old Site Revamped

    Hi Everybody:

    Please comment on my revamped website. I made the original website about 2 months ago. After getting much feed back I had revamped my website. I hope you all can give some constructive comments.


    Thank you


    Abang_uda

  • bill2006
    Lieutenant General

    • May 2006
    • 3421

    #2
    Re: Old Site Revamped

    Abang_uda
    -Your page is too wide, horizontal are a nuisance.
    -Checj your spelling "usefull" is "useful" and upper case or capital letters is the equivalent of "yelling"
    -You have two disclaimers. An Earnings one and another, either combine them under one link or label them to avoid confusion.
    -There is no Home button on the other pages. Users might close the browser window.

    Good luck
    Bill
    www.blueearthtea.com
    www.ftaaconsulting.com
    www.iaval.com
    www.theemeraldbay.com

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    • naghosthunter
      Lieutenant Colonel

      • Aug 2006
      • 693

      #3
      Re: Old Site Revamped

      also not created with bluevoda website builder :( sad

      welcome is the correct spelling check your spelling
      "Jim"

      Hillbilly Electronics LLC

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      • teresa52401
        Private

        • Jan 2007
        • 1

        #4
        Re: Old Site Revamped

        how do you publish your website ive tried my pass nad it wont work

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        • Bethers
          Major General & Forum Moderator

          • Feb 2006
          • 5224

          #5
          Re: Old Site Revamped

          It is hosted by VH, therefore we can review it.

          My comment also is that, while you are a foreigner, if you want a website in English, you'll need to find someone who can proof it for you. The mistakes are very noticeable.
          Beth
          A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

          SEO and Marketing Tools
          SEO - The Basics

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          • Lincslady
            Brigadier General

            • Jan 2006
            • 1397

            #6
            Re: Old Site Revamped

            Hi Abang_uda

            I agree with all the comments above, you need to be careful with your spelling, there are many mistakes.

            I also feel that you need a frame around your page and maybe tone down your colours a little so as to make it easier for your viewers to read.

            Your disclaimers would look better at the bottom of your page, also set your page guides so you have no sideways scroll.

            Ive done a little sample for you to give you some idea. keep tweaking you will get there :o)

            Click the link below for page guidelines (no more sideways scroll)

            http://www.vodahost.com/vodatalk/sho...eferrerid=5490

            How to Center your page
            http://www.vodahost.com/vodatalk/blu...tml#post124746




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            • abang_uda
              Corporal

              • Oct 2006
              • 17

              #7
              Re: Old Site Revamped

              Hi Everybody:

              Thank you for constructive comments. I will try to further improve the website by tweaking it here and there. Thank you especially to you Linda, I have check the link you gave it is quite impresive, but I need learn CSS to do it right ?

              Once again thank you, thank you thank you everyone


              abang_uda



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