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  • CarbonTerry
    Major General

    • Oct 2005
    • 2620

    Just finishing up

    Hi,
    Manufacturer of clear plastic boxes and clamshells for packaging, as well as clear plastic packaging tubes, containers and mailing and shipping tubes.

    is just about finished. I have a few photos to insert and to publish the "internal" pages for Naval's form pages.
    All criticism is taken as positive. Fire Away!!!
    Thanks
    Terry
    CarbonTerry
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  • Bethers
    Major General & Forum Moderator

    • Feb 2006
    • 5224

    #2
    Re: Just finishing up

    As much as I'm against "Welcome to" - I'll admit it's not bad how you're doing it- if you change it to "Welcome to MasterPac".

    I like how easy the page is to see - and to navigate. EXCEPT there is no link to the home page. I had trouble navigating back to it. I believe you need to add that as your first link on the left ones.

    Your home page shouldn't have that title at all - as that's the title of the product page - where it does fit. How about changing the home page title to "MasterPac - Thermoformed Plastic Packaging"

    Also - you have the same title on other pages. YOu need to get that corrected. I didn't look at your meta, but hope you have done that differently for each page. Every page has to have it's own title, description, etc - they should not repeat. That will hurt you.

    You've done a great job - I like the simplicity - now it's tweaking!
    Beth
    A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

    SEO and Marketing Tools
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    • CarbonTerry
      Major General

      • Oct 2005
      • 2620

      #3
      Re: Just finishing up

      Thanks for pointing things out. I have not done meta's yet and I need to properly title the pages.
      The "Welcome" is by the owners request. The customer is usually right.
      The logo is linked to the home page. I will have to think about that problem.
      Thanks again.
      CarbonTerry
      Semper Fi
      Still green...still mean......just not as lean

      Red Hawk Archery
      Zone 5 Photo
      My USMC

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      • Bethers
        Major General & Forum Moderator

        • Feb 2006
        • 5224

        #4
        Re: Just finishing up

        I found that the logo was linked, but most customers won't. Can you suggest to the customer the re-wording of the Welcome - it would behoove them to change that :)

        And, in webdesign, if the customer was always right, they'd be getting the traffic they wanted - and not paying other people to design and do the work. I listen to customers, but I don't ever tell them they're always right in this instance. In fact, when I'm hired, I let them know that I'll fight them tooth and nail on some things.
        Beth
        A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

        SEO and Marketing Tools
        SEO - The Basics

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        • CarbonTerry
          Major General

          • Oct 2005
          • 2620

          #5
          Re: Just finishing up

          "usually" should have been in ""s
          CarbonTerry
          Semper Fi
          Still green...still mean......just not as lean

          Red Hawk Archery
          Zone 5 Photo
          My USMC

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          • Dream Lady
            Major General

            • Feb 2006
            • 2036

            #6
            Re: Just finishing up

            Looks Great. I love the color scheme you have chosen and the logo/header. I see you still have a little work to do on the title pages. Easy to navigate, interesting content. Great Job!
            Cindy Smentowski

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            • CarbonTerry
              Major General

              • Oct 2005
              • 2620

              #7
              Re: Just finishing up

              Thank you Dream Lady
              CarbonTerry
              Semper Fi
              Still green...still mean......just not as lean

              Red Hawk Archery
              Zone 5 Photo
              My USMC

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              • CarbonTerry
                Major General

                • Oct 2005
                • 2620

                #8
                Re: Just finishing up

                Anyone?
                CarbonTerry
                Semper Fi
                Still green...still mean......just not as lean

                Red Hawk Archery
                Zone 5 Photo
                My USMC

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                • Dori
                  Lieutenant Colonel

                  • Sep 2006
                  • 581

                  #9
                  Re: Just finishing up

                  Hi CarbonTerry
                  The site looks great! Besides the other comments above, your Blister link on the Products page doesn't work.
                  Naturally Yours,
                  Dori
                  www.earthelixirs.com
                  www.earthelixirsinc.com
                  www.mineralmakeupdiva.com
                  www.virtualdesigndiva.com
                  www.enhancemineralcosmetics.com

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                  • Windameer Farm
                    Captain

                    • Dec 2006
                    • 207

                    #10
                    Re: Just finishing up

                    I liked the colors, lay out looks good. Easy to navigate. Do you do personalized logos? I looked but didn't see anything about it.

                    I wish you luck and prosperity.

                    Jolen
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                    • HeartMaster

                      #11
                      Re: Just finishing up

                      Very clean web design.
                      You have just the right balance of info-Content to technology on your Main/index page, and each interior page supports with tightly composed relevancy as well.

                      Beyond professionally simplistic, I believe you have preserved more than the minimal "personality" in this commercial site than is seen at first glance, and is worth congratulating you on......you have successfully achieved what many others cannot begin to appreciate.

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                      • CarbonTerry
                        Major General

                        • Oct 2005
                        • 2620

                        #12
                        Re: Just finishing up

                        uuuuuhh...wow...thanks
                        CarbonTerry
                        Semper Fi
                        Still green...still mean......just not as lean

                        Red Hawk Archery
                        Zone 5 Photo
                        My USMC

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