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  • My Website

    Please have a look and tell me what you think.

    www.cashflow4life.org

    Cheers
    Brian

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    Re: My Website

    Lot of work Brian,
    Somethings to look at again:
    -The beach photo is nice, but seems that you have sized it by pulling on the corners. Looks "flatten". Use PixResizer to correct.
    -The navigation links steer users away from your pages, consider changing the link so that it opens a new page, _blank in the Hyperlink window.
    -Bottom half is slightly off center. Combination of page width and layout. Balance it my moving the text and image of the SFI woman to the left.
    -You've included contact info: Brian Sheppard but added "N/A" remove this or change to info@yourdomain.com else you lose credibility.

    Good luck.
    Bill
    www.blueearthtea.com
    www.ftaaconsulting.com
    www.iaval.com
    www.theemeraldbay.com

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    • #3
      Re: My Website

      I agree with Bill. I also found that my eyes were darting around your site trying to figure out what it was all about. It seemed a bit disjointed to me.
      The logo in the upper right of the page doesn't look like it belongs to your site at all.
      Affordable Medical Insurance
      Discount Dental Plan
      Washington State Health Insurance
      Temporary Health Insurance
      Homeowner Insurance Quote

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      • #4
        Re: My Website

        Hello Bill
        Thanks for your help, i have changed it a little, but where do i find pixresizer.

        Cheers
        Bryski

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        • #5
          Re: My Website

          I agree with Bill. I also found that my eyes were darting around your site trying to figure out what it was all about. It seemed a bit disjointed to me.
          The logo in the upper right of the page doesn't look like it belongs to your site at all. On the upper left you have what appears to be a link with an underline and blue text but it isn't a link. This is also confusing to users. People are used to seeing blue text with an underline as something that will take them to something else.....

          Just my two cents worth..
          Affordable Medical Insurance
          Discount Dental Plan
          Washington State Health Insurance
          Temporary Health Insurance
          Homeowner Insurance Quote

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          • #6
            Re: My Website

            Here is Pix Resizer. Very simple and much used tool!

            Pix Resizer
            Affordable Medical Insurance
            Discount Dental Plan
            Washington State Health Insurance
            Temporary Health Insurance
            Homeowner Insurance Quote

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            • #7
              Re: My Website

              Hello again
              I have changed my links as suggested and tried to centralize things a little better. The logo is there as it is the products i hope to sell. As for my photo, not really sure how to do it yet. What do you think now. Thanks for your previous comments.
              Cheers
              Bryski

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              • #8
                Re: My Website

                Hello Again
                Could somebody please advize on the width and height i should set my webpage.

                Cheers
                Bryski

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                • #9
                  Re: My Website

                  Its ok i've done it

                  Thanks
                  Bryski

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                  • #10
                    Re: My Website

                    This is a good one my friend.
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                    • #11
                      Re: My Website

                      Hi Brian: Your home page looks good. You still need to center it. I would use 800 as your width as that is what most computers will see as centered.

                      I think the transition to your product pages works fairly well. You can hardly tell you are actually going to another website. I just have a couple of recommendations. I would try and match the nav buttons on your bv page to those on your other website in order to make it look more consistent. Here is the link to Navals thread on how to make custom buttons. I think it may help. http://www.vodahost.com/vodatalk/blu...s-nav-bar.html

                      I would also try and find the same font for the text if possible. May also want to look at your page title and keywords to be sure search engines can find you better.

                      I agree with Bill in that I would have your link to your other website open a new window, however, at the same time, I don't think it is that critical since you only have 1 other page on your site (bv webbuilder) that doesn't go to your affiliate site. I think that's up to you.

                      Great job!!
                      Cindy
                      Cindy Smentowski

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