Hi all!
My site is diet and weightloss related... www.flabfallsoff.com ...
I posted for comments about the site several weeks ago, and have been busy trying to get everything sorted out... tks to all for their comments.
The biggest thing I've been trying to do is vamp up the aesthetics of the site... it was pretty barren before, so how does it look now? I know there's a few tweaks still like some of the copy being a fraction of a mm too close to the LHS but I think it's getting there?
Needed to BREAK IT UP so it's not so much a loooong scroll... any better?
Some of my other pages (apart from main page like Links and Resources) still need looots of work but just getting off the ground with them...
The actual copy itself is something I am really interrogating...lol... in a direct response site like this the copy is ALL IMPORTANT... so any comments on that would be gr8 too but just note it's somewhat of a work in progress... lol :-
The hover ads have been a continual headache, still trying to sort them out. Pse would anyone comment on them - do they make you want to sign up for the newsletter - if you were in this health/diet target market? If not, why not? (and remember they are NOT coming up properly if you use Firefox or Opera...)
Naghost also made a gr8 suggestion with offering the book for a while gratis... to get testimonials... I am now DOING that - check out "Other Forums" - Free Classifieds!! roll up!! lol......... :-
Well, that's about it for now... have at it, all you gr8 folk @ Voda!! lol.
cheers
Will
My site is diet and weightloss related... www.flabfallsoff.com ...
I posted for comments about the site several weeks ago, and have been busy trying to get everything sorted out... tks to all for their comments.
The biggest thing I've been trying to do is vamp up the aesthetics of the site... it was pretty barren before, so how does it look now? I know there's a few tweaks still like some of the copy being a fraction of a mm too close to the LHS but I think it's getting there?
Needed to BREAK IT UP so it's not so much a loooong scroll... any better?
Some of my other pages (apart from main page like Links and Resources) still need looots of work but just getting off the ground with them...
The actual copy itself is something I am really interrogating...lol... in a direct response site like this the copy is ALL IMPORTANT... so any comments on that would be gr8 too but just note it's somewhat of a work in progress... lol :-
The hover ads have been a continual headache, still trying to sort them out. Pse would anyone comment on them - do they make you want to sign up for the newsletter - if you were in this health/diet target market? If not, why not? (and remember they are NOT coming up properly if you use Firefox or Opera...)
Naghost also made a gr8 suggestion with offering the book for a while gratis... to get testimonials... I am now DOING that - check out "Other Forums" - Free Classifieds!! roll up!! lol......... :-
Well, that's about it for now... have at it, all you gr8 folk @ Voda!! lol.
cheers
Will
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