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  • karry123
    Staff Sergeant

    • Feb 2007
    • 41

    website needs reviewed please

    Hello,

    I would love some feedback on any or all issues of my site please.
    Thank all of you for your feedback that I have recieved so far.

    Thank you,
    Karrye
    www.joyofit.org
  • larazovich
    General

    • Jul 2006
    • 5811

    #2
    Re: website needs reviewed please

    I like the look of it.
    First thing I notice, however, is that there seems to be no way to navigate.. then I scrolled down and found the enter button.
    I would be inclined to click away thinkng there was only just this page. Dunno about others, but for me having the navigation up to is easier to find.
    Liz
    www.sebastopolparty.com
    www.raynordescendents.com

    Ring the bells that still can ring

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    • asirimarco
      Brigadier General

      • Jun 2006
      • 1208

      #3
      Re: website needs reviewed please

      ditto - navigation buttons on both pages need to be seen easier - right away otherwise - colors good, site is centered.
      Ann
      www.MovingOn1.com - My Travel
      www.BeadedCustomDesigns.com - Jewelry
      www.FantasyManorArtStudio.com - Leather Art

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      • karry123
        Staff Sergeant

        • Feb 2007
        • 41

        #4
        Re: website needs reviewed please

        Thank you very much for your comments, I will relocate my navigation buttons and republish again.

        Thank you!
        Karrye
        www.joyofit.org

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        • bill2006
          Lieutenant General

          • May 2006
          • 3421

          #5
          Re: website needs reviewed please

          Your links now work.
          A suggestion: you've placed two "Enter" buttons, one for your site and the second for BV/VH. Consider eliminating the latter. Users will click on the BV/VH banner.
          Bill
          www.blueearthtea.com
          www.ftaaconsulting.com
          www.iaval.com
          www.theemeraldbay.com

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          • karry123
            Staff Sergeant

            • Feb 2007
            • 41

            #6
            Re: website needs reviewed please

            Thank you Bill2006
            Did the button I changed to a darker gold look better?

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            • Bethers
              Major General & Forum Moderator

              • Feb 2006
              • 5224

              #7
              Re: website needs reviewed please

              Since you only have a couple pages - and it's really all one sales letter - I'd combine the two pages and have one longer page.

              You might want to consider having other pages with other informative info, though.
              Beth
              A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

              SEO and Marketing Tools
              SEO - The Basics

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              • karry123
                Staff Sergeant

                • Feb 2007
                • 41

                #8
                Re: website needs reviewed please

                Thank you Beth. I will start working on that asap.
                I have the bv banner on the first page and had a enter buton there, I am not sure where to copy and paste the info to get the banner to work in my site, same as the others. I just copied the banners and made a nav button for them. I know that's not done correctly(but it worked) Can you tell me where to copy and paste this info to get them to work properly?
                Thanks again,
                Karry
                www.joyofit.org

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                • karry123
                  Staff Sergeant

                  • Feb 2007
                  • 41

                  #9
                  Re: website needs reviewed please

                  I have redone my website and look forward to any responses. I but a bv banner in my site but am not sure where to copy and paste the info for it to show up . I copy and pasted the banner but not the info. I am not sure where to copy and paste it.
                  Thank you,
                  Karry
                  www.joyofit.org

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