we have had a tweak what you think so far ?????????

[Karen Ringrose]

Am i ready to Launch my site yet ????

Well, we have taken on onboard all advice weve had and tweaked this and that and we feel we are almost there ! We have a few forms to finnish and a couple of pages to link, but other than that have we cracked it this time round ?
Any feed back totaly appreciated & respected please
thanks ever so
Karen

[bill2006]

Re: we have had a tweak what you think so far ?????????

And is your page http://urbancouturepaperweddingstuff.com ?

[Karen Ringrose]

Re: we have had a tweak what you think so far ?????????

Hi Bill
Yea sure thats the one, is there any probs we should know about ?
Rgards
Karen

[Mook25]

Re: we have had a tweak what you think so far ?????????

If your site is the one that Bill has mentioned above then it looks good. One thing i did notice was that the page seemed to load a little slow, some of the pictures particuly. Also the pictures to the top of the page seemed a little blurred to me probably from where you have stretched them to fit too much. Try using vodas pix resizer to correct this problem. Apart from that it looks good. good layout and content

[Karen Ringrose]

Re: we have had a tweak what you think so far ?????????

hi
If you mean the bridal pic's then they are blue voda templates my hubby assures me and apparently not alot that we can do about that ! or can we ? Thanks for feedback much appreciated.
Regards
Karen

[davidundalicia]

Re: we have had a tweak what you think so far ?????????

Karen, have had a good browse through your delightfully presented Wedding Stationery Site.......looks good, and I like the colour.
Tested your contact form, it need a security update, but its working OK.

All the links work except for the "BESPOKE" button....no joy there I´m afraid.

When you are ready, I would like to exchange links with you.......

If you send me a copy of your Order form, I could take a look, with the view of creating the appropiate PFP script for you.

Anyway, your tweaks are paying off, so good luck with your business.

Oh, and thanks for dropping by my Database Management Site.

[Karen Ringrose]

Re: we have had a tweak what you think so far ?????????

Hi David
Thanks for the very encouraging words, ime busting here and cant wait to go live ! We are aware of the bespoke form not being published yet it will be finnished off tomoz as hubby not too good tonight ! Yea deffinately would be more than happy to exchange limks with you :) cool ! Look forward to exchange day LOL
Take it easy
Regards
Karen

[bill2006]

Re: we have had a tweak what you think so far ?????????

Bit of detective work trying to find your page. Anyways, good work.

Things to consider:
-That header: combining upper and lower case can be successful, comical or confusing. All depends on what you are tryig to communicate. I was looking for a hidden anagram. Also it is not center with the text above or the rest of your content.
-Watch your grammar, commas and period and use of caps is very importnat in your opening sentence: "Firstly Congratulations ....."
-In the Style Section, not sure what the first font is as a big balck rectangle covers it.
-Might want to move "Terms & Conditions' to the end of the NavBar, leave the good stuff that sells upfront.

Congratulations, your site looks very nice and the pics tell the story best.

[Karen Ringrose]

Re: we have had a tweak what you think so far ?????????

Hi
Sorry i forgot to say that Marcus has put an OS commerce cart behind, but the link isnt there at the moment as we are updating all the info and prices. So once all the info is there people wil be able to use that form. But we will bear in mnd your generous offer thanks again
Regards
Karen

[bill2006]

Re: we have had a tweak what you think so far ?????????

Forgot to mention, watch your page titles "Term and cond - Microsoft...." could be rewritten to "terms & conditions your domain"

[Dori]

Re: we have had a tweak what you think so far ?????????

There is something you can do with the 'BV template' images. Right click on the template and 'return to its original size'. The clarity will return, but it will reduce the size of the template.

You really have a great site, but the skewed images detract from it.

I also agree with what Bill said about the mixed case 'Urban Couture'. This can be done correctly but not with just using plain black text. It doesn't look like it is a finished logo or that it belongs on your site.

Also, bottom copyright information should be 'Couture' not conture.

[Karen Ringrose]

Re: we have had a tweak what you think so far ?????????

Hi Dori
I have been tweaking away all day and so hope this is right now !
Thanks for all your feedback, much appreciated.
Regards
Karen

[mark6110]

Re: we have had a tweak what you think so far ?????????

Love the site and I would also love to trade links on my princess-bride site when you are live
Regards,
Mark

[Karen Ringrose]

Re: we have had a tweak what you think so far ?????????

Thanks Mark will be happy to trade links with you if you have some snazzy html script link that you would like us to put on there for you just reply to this and we will be happy to add you, if you could do the same for us that would be cool.

we have a very limited knowelge of html so hence the request for what you would like to see on our sign

take it easy

Karen

[Dori]

Re: we have had a tweak what you think so far ?????????

Karen,

I totally forgot to tell you to check your spelling on stationary, it should be stationery.