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  • ace5548
    Major

    • Aug 2006
    • 351

    Please Review My Store--I Think I'm Ready

    Hello Everyone,

    I finished the initial building of my store. Would you please critique it and let me know what you think?

    Everyone and every critique is welcome.



    Thanks so much for all your help.

    Ted Marlett
    Simply Quit - Smoking
  • Girlonthehill
    General

    • Oct 2005
    • 4193

    #2
    Re: Please Review My Store--I Think I'm Ready

    Hi, Ted.

    It looks excellent to me. I like the layout and colours, I found it easy to navigate, the choosing products and adding to cart was simple enough and the navigation works a treat. I didn't try every single page but did try about half and they worked perfectly. I didn't spot any glaring errors and found your site very informative with a good write up on each of your products. Sterling job, Sir, and I wish you the very best of luck with your site.

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    • ace5548
      Major

      • Aug 2006
      • 351

      #3
      Re: Please Review My Store--I Think I'm Ready

      Thank You Amanda,

      I am working on every day. I appreciate your kind words.

      Ted
      Simply Quit - Smoking

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      • Nite Producer
        Lieutenant Colonel

        • May 2006
        • 593

        #4
        Re: Please Review My Store--I Think I'm Ready

        Very nice and very defending ;)
        The Producer

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        • ace5548
          Major

          • Aug 2006
          • 351

          #5
          Re: Please Review My Store--I Think I'm Ready

          Hi Nite Producer,

          Thanks for the nice comment. I am trying, although I don't know what "very defending" would mean.
          Simply Quit - Smoking

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          • bill2006
            Lieutenant General

            • May 2006
            • 3421

            #6
            Re: Please Review My Store--I Think I'm Ready

            Looks good.

            Good luck in your endeavor.
            Bill
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            • ace5548
              Major

              • Aug 2006
              • 351

              #7
              Re: Please Review My Store--I Think I'm Ready

              Bill,

              Thank you for the good words. I will work hard at making my endeavor work.
              Simply Quit - Smoking

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              • Mook25
                Brigadier General

                • Oct 2005
                • 1427

                #8
                Re: Please Review My Store--I Think I'm Ready

                The site looks excellent, nice colours and well layed out as mentioned before. The only part of the site that let it down, i though, was the bottom part which seemed messy and unkept. just a simple replacing and alligning exercise should sort this and make it look more proffesional. Good luck with your site.
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                • Bethers
                  Major General & Forum Moderator

                  • Feb 2006
                  • 5224

                  #9
                  Re: Please Review My Store--I Think I'm Ready

                  Hi Ted,
                  You've heard from me before :) - right now I simply suggest you add alt text to the left and right pics on the home page - as they don't have it now.

                  I also like how you've expanded the website into other items.

                  You've done a great job.

                  I had one problem - when I took a product to the shopping cart - then clicked back to go back to the store - it kept me on secure pages. Shouldn't they go back to the regular pages then? And after I have something in the cart - shouldn't there be a link on the pages to go back to check out (go back to the shopping cart?) You don't have that option on most pages, and I had to go to another product and add it to the cart to get back there. You'll lose some sales this way!

                  (There's always something else, isn't there!)
                  Beth
                  A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

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                  • ace5548
                    Major

                    • Aug 2006
                    • 351

                    #10
                    Re: Please Review My Store--I Think I'm Ready

                    Hi Mook25,

                    Thank you for the kind words. I will work on the lower part of the pages as I thought that also, but have been, up to this point, unable to work on the store as much as I wanted to.

                    I will probably have it done in a few days.
                    Simply Quit - Smoking

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                    • ace5548
                      Major

                      • Aug 2006
                      • 351

                      #11
                      Re: Please Review My Store--I Think I'm Ready

                      Beth,

                      Thank you for looking at my store (again). I put the photos on the front page in a way that I cannot put alt tags on the pictures, all I can go is link the pictures to something. This may be partly a way to do an alt tag. I think I will have to look at this next weekend when I have the time to change it.

                      I don't understand what you mean about the checkout. Does this mean that I will have to go through each product and check to see what is on the checkout page information? Do you have any idea why some would have the link to the checkout and some would not?

                      I tried to go through the "add to cart" process and was taken to the six item listing of the products--and if I wanted to go to a different area to look at some specific products I had to go back to the catagory and add it this way--or spend a lot of time looking at six items at a time--all in random order.

                      I am not totaly sure how to do as you suggested, but I will look at it all this weekend.

                      Thank you,
                      Simply Quit - Smoking

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                      • Bethers
                        Major General & Forum Moderator

                        • Feb 2006
                        • 5224

                        #12
                        Re: Please Review My Store--I Think I'm Ready

                        Ted, your home page and many of the product list pages, do not have the right side bar with the choice of seeing the cart and or even of searching for products that is on the product pages. I don't know if you can change it so that's on all pages in Soho or not - but if you can, that would solve the problem.
                        Beth
                        A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

                        SEO and Marketing Tools
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                        • ace5548
                          Major

                          • Aug 2006
                          • 351

                          #13
                          Re: Please Review My Store--I Think I'm Ready

                          Hi Beth,

                          Thanks for the info. I will look for a way to put the search box and the cart on the pages. I think there is a way to do this, but I will get it solved.

                          I suppose I may have to look at a different template, which is something I don't really want to do.

                          I do know there are scripts somewhere that I should be able to use for what you are suggesting.

                          I will look into SoHo a little deeper. One thing I will also do is go back to the SoHo forum and see if they have anything about it or how it can be fixed.
                          Simply Quit - Smoking

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                          • ace5548
                            Major

                            • Aug 2006
                            • 351

                            #14
                            Re: Please Review My Store--I Think I'm Ready

                            Beth,

                            One other thing I wanted to tell you. I am deactivating the hosting on SOL today for this particular store. So now VodaHost has that store in their system totally.
                            Simply Quit - Smoking

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                            • Bethers
                              Major General & Forum Moderator

                              • Feb 2006
                              • 5224

                              #15
                              Re: Please Review My Store--I Think I'm Ready

                              kewl- I just sent Karen this thread - she might have the answer on the points I was making since she works in Soho.
                              Beth
                              A Child's Palace - Pinata Palace - Moxie Enterprises

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