Please comment my web

[Mook25]

Re: Please comment my web

hey there, looking good. looks clean and professional. The only bit i'm not too keen on is, as david said, the long domain name. It's not a catchy one that people will remember and if they do they've got to remember how to spell it and where to add the dashes. You'd be better off getting a new one and shortening it. To save wasting your current domain you could point it to the new one.

[alas]

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Hi Mook25,
I actually have another which yesterday I made it as the exact copy of this one, but the name is www.mediterraneotanzania.com.
I need the other long domainame because has in it all the keywords which customers are using to search for an hotel in Tanzania.
Thanks
P.S. Any idea how to publish on ftp program David's form?

[proactivator]

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Hi there,
There is some really elegant design work here. Your pages are clean, visually very appealing and impart information is a direct and simple way, and no scrolling which is fantastic (well not on my screen although looking at your page source it does look as if your page width is 900px which is a shame: 780 would have been better). With some niggles ironed out, as mentioned by others, this is high class. My niggles:1) do not date your images in your gallery page. The photos are not date dependant and may impart a feeling that the site is not often revised. 2) Your entrance to the site page: there really is too much going on. People just need to click on the appropriate language and move on. I suggest you keep it to a few good static colour images without the black and white to colour business. Remember; just because you can do it does not mean you should (remember all the indiscriminate use of flash a few years ago. 3)Some of your pages are not properly centered in the browser window. 4) It would be nice to have a page about yourself and the history of the hotel etc. Whether or not it a family run business and so on. Sell yourselves as well as the location.
This is all meant to be constructive and I hope you take it as so. You never know, if the hotel falls on hard times you may have a second career as a web designer!
Regards, James.

[davidundalicia]

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Hi Mook25,
I actually have another which yesterday I made it as the exact copy of this one, but the name is www.mediterraneotanzania.com.
I need the other long domainame because has in it all the keywords which customers are using to search for an hotel in Tanzania.
Thanks
P.S. Any idea how to publish on ftp program David's form?

Alas, you dont PUBLISH the processing.php file
you should use the BV FTP program as outlined in the instructions.

for help with the ftp program, have a look at the vodahost FTP video tutorial, and everything will be a lot clearer.......

If you still have problems, email me at the address within the instructions....

[alas]

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Ok David ,
Thank you again
Alas

[SChajin]

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Hi Alas,

I'm ready whenever you are. Do you want me to just pluck it off your site?

[carey,brandin]

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i am agreeing with all the above. it looks very good. and not to sound like i am copying anyone(lol) yea i wish i was there.
great job.

brandin

[alas]

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Hi Sharon, I have put your web link on my index page.
Check it out if you like it, and let me know.
Saluti
Alas

[SChajin]

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Hi Alas, please send me your logo so I can place you in Hot Getaways.

siti@bellsouth.net

[SChajin]

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My friend that is great but you might want to start a links page, I love it but I shouldn't be on your front page....Also when you set up the link..set it up so it comes up as a separate page by using the blank link. You don't want them to completely leave your site....OK?

[alas]

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Hi Sharon,
I had followed your suggestions.
I have a link page now : http://www.tanzania-zanzibar-dar-es-...nia-links.html
Here I placed your web link.
If you like to link my site, can you link this other one ?
It is the exact copy of the above one, but I do not have the link page ( I had no enough time)
www.mediterraneotanzania.com
Thank you
Ciao
Alas

[alas]

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Hi Sharon how can I send you my logo?
Which email can I use?
Alas

[Vasili]

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You may wish to review your textual Content to be sure you have added the extra "space" after your last typed character in every textbox, which will prevent your last line of text presenting as if set at 1.5 line spacing.

(ex. "...if the last line has text composed properly, add the space!_" seen in red for illustrative purposes -- of course, it will be 'invisible')

Very visually attractive site.
Very fine use of the constructs, and the minute refinements of spacing and alignments are trivial compared to the efforts you've made to properly plan and compose a richly designed site.
It is now time you re-apply your focus on advancing preparations for Search Engine compliance to attain the results you deserve.

[alas]

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Thank you very much Vasili, I will follow your advise, I am trying to understand the whole search engine thinking, there is a lot to learn, also soo many different ideas of how to get a high ranking.
Any suggestions?
Saluti a te Generalissimo
Alas

[darkcloudestine]

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Well I got one also on "TOMATO POLITICS" see my homepage.