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I appreciate your remarks Ms AmaDee. No offense taken at all.
I understood what you meant. Thanks also for the suggestions re those first three paragraphs. You rephrased it much better and I uploaded the corrections already.
Cheers,
JP

[AmaDee]

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I copied/pasted the next section of your English Homepage and did the proofreading and have placed them below:

Basic Commercial Questions

. What will be your preferred way of buying? Through agents, distributors, export management companies, export trading companies, sourcing consultants in the seller’s region or by yourself?
· Will there be any difficulties obtaining accurate market and competitive analysis in the target country?
· What will be the final price of the middlemen cited above?
· What pricing strategy will you use?
· Are you on the safe side for eventual currency fluctuations?
· Along with your shipments, do you intend to insure the transactions?
· Is the final price competitive in the domestic or international markets that you want to approach?
· Will the envisaged transactions be isolated with a limited or ongoing number of transactions?
· Which payment method will be acceptable for both parties (open account, advance payment, consignment, document collection, letter of credit)?
· Are you documented about import tariffs imposed on certain goods from the exporter’s country?
· Who will be in charge of final quality control before shipping?
· Are you pursuing international business to supplement domestic sales, or will you export to other markets?

[TSP]

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We are in debt with you Ms AmaDee. Your very subtle refinements of the text are highly appreciated! If you happen to travel to this part of the globe we promise to make time to show you around and invite you to the great local dim sum places and seafood restaurants on our outlying islands like Cheung Chau.
JP

[AmaDee]

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you promise?

[TSP]

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Take our word for it. It's been a long time since I visited your state but I can assure you that our seafood can compete with the Golden Islands in South Georgia!

[TSP]

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BTW, fyi Ms AmaDee: Your customer “My personal office” ought to be informed about a slight problem on its site. A small text-over-text problem at the end of the main page.
(I was checking some of your designs and they look very nice and professional)

[AmaDee]

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JP, where exactly is this overlapping? i have checked using firefox and IE7 and can't seem to see it.

[TSP]

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I use IE7. The last line of the text is overlapping your insert:

© 2007 My Personal Office
Website by
Designs by Mapillar

[AmaDee]

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I still can't see it. Is anyone else viewing www.mypersonaloffice.biz/menu.html last line overlapping?

Thanks, JP. I can't fix it if I don't know how it looks.

[TSP]

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Anyone to give some feedback regarding the ads by Google and links towards Amazon books, I just added?
Ok or too messy?
Do they connect mostly to the content of the page?
Advice is welcome.

[Malhoeira]

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Re: my personal office. No overlapping that I can see.

Re: amazon ads. Book ads can be helpful.
I find the huge amazon ad on the information page a distraction.

[TSP]

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Yes, am a tad unhappy with that one as well but want to keep it. I'm thinking of moving it down to the end of the page.

[TSP]

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I still can't see it. Is anyone else viewing www.mypersonaloffice.biz/menu.html last line overlapping?

Thanks, JP. I can't fix it if I don't know how it looks.

Oh well, then I'm the only one who gets it wrong. A simple way to arrange the issue would be to make that page half an inch longer and lower your insert to the bottom. Anyway, you know more than I do about webdesign. I only was trying to help with my remark.
Cheers,
JP