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  • dive daisy
    Sergeant

    • Mar 2007
    • 36

    new extreme sports site to peruse

    hello everyone.
    please can you have a look at this site and give opinion, it is not completely finished so please bear this in mind! please be critical but also please give an explaination to an alternatives of what has been done. this is a first attempt to webbuilding without any previous knowledge whatsoever.

    thanks
    thanks for all your help!

    Dive Daisy
  • Patience
    Brigadier General

    • Mar 2007
    • 1011

    #2
    Re: new extreme sports site to peruse

    Very nice Dive Daisy. Gorgeous layout, tons of information. Really good looking site!
    Vicki

    www.staceygoldendesigns.net

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    • rlafontain
      Private

      • May 2007
      • 2

      #3
      Re: new extreme sports site to peruse

      wow, well done, congrats

      r

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      • larazovich
        General

        • Jul 2006
        • 5811

        #4
        Re: new extreme sports site to peruse

        Originally posted by dive daisy
        hello everyone.
        please can you have a look at this site and give opinion, it is not completely finished so please bear this in mind! please be critical but also please give an explaination to an alternatives of what has been done. this is a first attempt to webbuilding without any previous knowledge whatsoever.

        thanks
        http://www.bulgariaextreme.com/index.php
        This is a lovely site. It loads well, is easy to navigate, has a lot of information.. It is an amazing accomplishment for a first timer, or even an experienced site maker. well done.

        Couple of questions - You call this an extreme sports site; it feels more like an extreme vacation site.
        Are you marketing these vacations as extreme sports vacations? If so, that could be emphasized a bit more.

        The verbage on the frontpage is alittle awkward - I think maybe be sure to use complete sentences rather than fragments. (The only website you will need to refer to .. could be This is the only website..etc.)
        This is the paragraph you really want to grab your customer, so it should be slick and crisp..

        Consider why you think Bulgaria is a better choice than anywhere else, and talk about that a bit. Is it better priced than another place? Is there more to do? Is the weather better? Is it less crowded?
        These are the kinds of things you could highlight in bullet points.. just a thought.
        Anyways, great site. Good job.

        Regards,
        Liz
        Liz
        www.sebastopolparty.com
        www.raynordescendents.com

        Ring the bells that still can ring

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        • bill2006
          Lieutenant General

          • May 2006
          • 3421

          #5
          Re: new extreme sports site to peruse

          Nice work,
          Ditto above comments by Liz, add spell check; on the right of your screen "Backcountry" is mispelled "...rty"
          -Went to 'booking-airport transfer' and lost your page. No way of going back as the browser's back did not work. Same thing for several other pages where it appears that you link to third party websites. Might want to make them open in separate windows. Use "_blank" in the links section.
          Bill
          www.blueearthtea.com
          www.ftaaconsulting.com
          www.iaval.com
          www.theemeraldbay.com

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          • SChajin
            Major General

            • Jan 2006
            • 2792

            #6
            Re: new extreme sports site to peruse

            Good Stuff
            Sharon Chajin

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            • nzbr
              Lieutenant Colonel

              • Dec 2006
              • 546

              #7
              Re: new extreme sports site to peruse

              Nice pictures on the top!

              Problem: when you go in "Locations" then "Sofia", then you choose:
              "places to see"
              "pubs and restaurants"
              "shopping"

              None of these 3 links above seem to work. It's coming up error "404 Not Found"

              Cheers
              N Z B R
              t o u r s
              New Zealand Tours
              Excursiones en Nueva Zelanda
              Nova Zelandia Pacotes e Roteiros
              Nouvelle Zelande Voyage
              Neuseeland Reisen

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              • dive daisy
                Sergeant

                • Mar 2007
                • 36

                #8
                Re: new extreme sports site to peruse

                Thanks for all your help, i am gradually going through all points taken.
                thanks NZBR these parts of the web have just not been done yet, i think i said this at the start of the forum, will hopefully be finished by tuesday and will publish it again lol. hopefully the gallery with jalbum is put on today if you keep your eyes peeled.

                thanks for all your help.
                thanks for all your help!

                Dive Daisy

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