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  • rockycusa
    Sergeant

    • Jun 2007
    • 20

    My first offical site......I open for help

    This is my first real web site. Ive messed around with a few pages before tryin to figure things out.......So any help would be nice, I've tried to design it for adsense.
    rockycusa
  • LadyEye
    General & Forum Moderator

    • Jun 2006
    • 10526

    #2
    Re: My first offical site......I open for help

    Overall pretty good job ,... kudos to you ...

    You need to center a few of your pages ... lol on the snow on May 24th - Only in Canada ...

    You need a few apostrophes in your scrolling on the index page - that's and I'm in the sentence - Now that's what I'm talking about.

    You might add fishing after some of your page titles - like you have them called, lake, stream - consider lake fishing, stream fishing, - might do you a little better with seos -

    Good job, no problem loading, easy to navigate ..

    I am having trout for dinner tomorrow .. I didn't catch it though, lol ... but I remember my first mud sucker I ever caught, on a safety pin, string and a wooden pole, lol ...

    Happy Fishing, it's quite popular around here ...

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    • rockycusa
      Sergeant

      • Jun 2007
      • 20

      #3
      Re: My first offical site......I open for help

      Thanks I'll make them changes this morning.........i've also caught many a fish on a saftey pin when I was young..........lol
      rockycusa

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      • whiteshepherd
        Brigadier General

        • Apr 2007
        • 1341

        #4
        Re: My first offical site......I open for help

        I agree with Lady Eye ... congratulations on your website ... now as for catching fish on a safety pin can't say I have ever tried ... but my old German shepherd used to have fun chasing them in the river and actually caught a fish in the shallows one day ... he got such a surprise he dropped it and it swam away ... lol ...
        kym, merlin & tala
        creating white majick
        www.whiteshepherds.com.au
        www.unitedwhiteshepherds.com.au
        www.merlinsmajick.com
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        • SAman
          Major General

          • Mar 2007
          • 2009

          #5
          Re: My first offical site......I open for help

          Great site. The pics at the top of the pages are beautiful. but I kept looking for a pic or something to come up next to the first part of the text.
          I just got a white space. Those Brookies, and the lake trout are alot of fun to catch. Keep up the good work.
          Mike

          Any excuse for non performance only weakens the charactor

          In God We Trust

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