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  • Dream Lady
    Major General

    • Feb 2006
    • 2036

    Need Review and Comments Please

    Good Day! Well I threw up another website a few months ago and would appreciate your reviewing and offering up suggestions and advice.

    My overall goal with this site, is to attempt to explain network marketing as a valid business model, to those who shy away from it. I started with the idea of being primiarly educational, but have also linked to my primary website. Of course my end goal is to have people sign up.

    I wanted to keep it simple, yet informative. From your perspective
    • Do the movies work for you?
    • Do you see any design flaws?
    • Do I explain network marketing and present it so that it's easy to understand? Did you find any spelling or grammatical errors?
    • Does it flow from concept to concept ok?
    • Do you have any suggestions on how to tie in my primary site better than I have.
    • Of course anything else you can suggest.
    I respect all opinions and have a very open mind...so please be really honest! Thanks

    Cindy Smentowski
  • Glomania
    Second Lieutenant

    • May 2006
    • 143

    #2
    Re: Need Review and Comments Please

    Hi there had a look at your site looks great and flows well . Noticed a couple of issues
    1 slight line showing (miss alignment) one thinks front page 1st para 4th line down runs through all pages same place.
    Taxes 2nd bullet point (repairts) T added by mistake.

    Hope this helps
    regards
    Alber

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    • whiteshepherd
      Brigadier General

      • Apr 2007
      • 1341

      #3
      Re: Need Review and Comments Please

      Hi Dream Lady ...

      Liked the site ... it sucked me in to reading and watching the videos .. lol ... which is what you want...

      A couple of things ... one could be just personal ... I wondered about a border of some kind to frame the work/infrmation area?

      The other thing is the visited links on the homepage are very dark and hard to see.

      Well done ... makes you think ...
      kym, merlin & tala
      creating white majick
      www.whiteshepherds.com.au
      www.unitedwhiteshepherds.com.au
      www.merlinsmajick.com
      www.kymdunbar.com

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      • LadyEye
        General & Forum Moderator

        • Jun 2006
        • 10526

        #4
        Re: Need Review and Comments Please

        Hey Cindy

        How r u? Good to see you, in between all your trips, and you even had time to make another site, lol ... good for you ... it models your other site, very nice ... I like brown, nice colors, you could line up or do something a little different with your movie buttons ... I mainly come into your thread to say "Hey Great Site and to "Say Hi!"" ....


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        • Dream Lady
          Major General

          • Feb 2006
          • 2036

          #5
          Re: Need Review and Comments Please

          Alber: Thanks for the comments. I have made those corrections and they will appear the next time I publish.

          Kym & Merlin: Thank you so much for taking the time to watch the videos and to give me your input. That's what I hope for is that they are interesting enough to watch and then ponder over the information. That is my goal. I'll check out the links once visited and see what color style I have them set to. Thanks for the info.

          Holly!!! Hey girl, I'm great, how about you? I've been popping in and out more often lately, but I never seem to pop in when you are here. Thanks for looking. Yea, I was kinda thinking the same thing...the movie buttons, I need to do something with that page. Any suggestions? Email me sometime and let me know how things are going!!!
          Cindy Smentowski

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          • Dream Lady
            Major General

            • Feb 2006
            • 2036

            #6
            Re: Need Review and Comments Please

            Ok, I made all the changes recommended. Thank you.

            WhiteShepard...could you tell me if the visited links are easier to read in your browser now? Thanks!
            Cindy Smentowski

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            • C L
              General

              • Jul 2006
              • 5561

              #7
              Re: Need Review and Comments Please

              Hi Cindy,

              What a nice site.....I love the color scheme & the layout....very informative, thanks, I've been reading & watching....you did a real good job on this......my site is nowhere near some of the sites produced with VodaHost.......this one rank's up there in my books...nice & clean.

              Well done!

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              • whiteshepherd
                Brigadier General

                • Apr 2007
                • 1341

                #8
                Re: Need Review and Comments Please

                It looks great ... and the links are easier to see too ... I agree with CL's comments too ...
                kym, merlin & tala
                creating white majick
                www.whiteshepherds.com.au
                www.unitedwhiteshepherds.com.au
                www.merlinsmajick.com
                www.kymdunbar.com

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                • Collectors-info
                  General

                  • Feb 2006
                  • 8703

                  #9
                  Re: Need Review and Comments Please

                  No cheating! I see you covered up the bit that sticks out from the template with a shape.LOL
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                  Regards Chris.

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                  www.chrismorris.co.uk

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                  • McBuff
                    Sergeant Major

                    • Aug 2006
                    • 87

                    #10
                    Re: Need Review and Comments Please

                    I watched all the movies and its way past my bedtime. That one on MLM was very, very good and having it done by cartoon characters was really interesting. Your site rocks!
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                    • Dream Lady
                      Major General

                      • Feb 2006
                      • 2036

                      #11
                      Re: Need Review and Comments Please

                      CL and WhiteShepard: Thanks for the nice comments and rechecking the links!
                      McBuff: I thought the cartoons did a good job to. The one on mlm is long, but if people watch it all the way through, I think it is educational. Thanks for the rocks!! lol

                      Chris: You caught me!! It's the only way I knew how to do it!! Thank you so much for recreating the image without the line that sticks out! I have replaced my original image and rectangle shapes (the coverup) with your revised image. Thanks again for doing that. One of these days, I'll figure out how. Oh...I just thought...I bet I could have done that in paint pretty easily and just saved, right? Thanks again!
                      Cindy Smentowski

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                      • SChajin
                        Major General

                        • Jan 2006
                        • 2792

                        #12
                        Re: Need Review and Comments Please

                        Cindy, Just a great job....Loved it
                        Sharon Chajin

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                        • Dream Lady
                          Major General

                          • Feb 2006
                          • 2036

                          #13
                          Re: Need Review and Comments Please

                          Thanks Sharon! Always a work in progress, right?
                          Cindy Smentowski

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