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  • Bayea
    Corporal

    • Jul 2007
    • 11

    My turn . . . new web site up for review

    Hi all, I just completed my first web site and would really appreciate it if you could review it and give me some feedback.
    thanks so much.

  • mwalsh62
    Major

    • Jul 2007
    • 426

    #2
    Re: My turn . . . new web site up for review

    Hiya!

    The site looks good! Only thing i noticed on a quick once through was no link for "cutting boards".

    Keep it up!

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    • Bayea
      Corporal

      • Jul 2007
      • 11

      #3
      Re: My turn . . . new web site up for review

      Thanks Mike,
      Yeah, the cutting boards link is the only one i haven't finished yet. I have to make some so i can take some picts ! Been too busy doing my web site.

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      • egar50
        Captain

        • May 2007
        • 229

        #4
        Re: My turn . . . new web site up for review

        Hello

        Very nice site

        The cutting boards page doesn`t seem to have been named and so does not open

        Best of luck
        egar50

        www.thesoftwarebay.com
        Computer Software, Magazines and Books

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        • egar50
          Captain

          • May 2007
          • 229

          #5
          Re: My turn . . . new web site up for review

          I see you know about this page already.

          I will have to be quicker to post in future.
          egar50

          www.thesoftwarebay.com
          Computer Software, Magazines and Books

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          • Bayea
            Corporal

            • Jul 2007
            • 11

            #6
            Re: My turn . . . new web site up for review

            "cutting boards" fixed

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            • egar50
              Captain

              • May 2007
              • 229

              #7
              Re: My turn . . . new web site up for review

              One more observation, "cutting boards" page appears centered on my screen, all other pages appear to the left.
              egar50

              www.thesoftwarebay.com
              Computer Software, Magazines and Books

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              • whiteshepherd
                Brigadier General

                • Apr 2007
                • 1341

                #8
                Re: My turn . . . new web site up for review

                beautiful woodwork ... you have done a great job with your website ...

                a couple of observations ...

                your gallery is slow to load and that is because your images are big ... there is a free tool here called pixresizer that will help youoptimise them for the web ... Hopefully Collector's will come along with his great advice on photos ...

                your page transitions seem to be set differently on some of the pages which gives a disjointed feel when browsing from page to page ... I really liked the fade effect ...

                Also maybe consider centring all your pages in the browser ...

                well done ... I hope you do well ...
                kym, merlin & tala
                creating white majick
                www.whiteshepherds.com.au
                www.unitedwhiteshepherds.com.au
                www.merlinsmajick.com
                www.kymdunbar.com

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                • bill2006
                  Lieutenant General

                  • May 2006
                  • 3421

                  #9
                  Re: My turn . . . new web site up for review

                  Originally posted by Bayea View Post
                  "cutting boards" fixed
                  Bayea,
                  A couple of things to look for:
                  -The Cutting Boards page is up as "coming soon" if this is incorrect, check the links.
                  -Do a search for Bether's comments on titles and metatags. Help the search engines look for you. Example, instead of 'Normas woodworking' for your home page title, consider 'Handcrafted Unique Gifts by Norma'
                  -Pages off center, already mentioned above, check that you don't have hidden items left behind text or images and click 'center in browser' in Page Properties.
                  -On your contact page, migth want to get rid of the underscore 'First_Name' and for you Guestbook, change the test message to something like 'welcome, stop by an visit', etc.

                  Nice woodwork.
                  Bill
                  www.blueearthtea.com
                  www.ftaaconsulting.com
                  www.iaval.com
                  www.theemeraldbay.com

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                  • Bayea
                    Corporal

                    • Jul 2007
                    • 11

                    #10
                    Re: My turn . . . new web site up for review

                    Thank you Whiteshepherd and Bill2006 for your comments. I appreciate you taking the time to check my site. Your comments were taken and applied.

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                    • Vasili
                      Moderator

                      • Mar 2006
                      • 14683

                      #11
                      Re: My turn . . . new web site up for review

                      A couple more things to consider:
                      1. Your page-to-page transitions are off, making your lelments hop: be sure that each element is in exactly the same position (check this using the axis tool in lower right of the BV browser -- click once on each element, and not the x/y line positions which refer to the top-left of each item registration)

                      2. You have "add to cart" and all the other PayPal elements in place, but don't you think it would be more proper to list individual prices or scales of price ranges somewhere near pictures of items you are offering without having to got TO the cart to find out how much things are?

                      I will pop in again to take a closer look once these are addressed...(Looking Good!)
                      . VodaWebs....Luxury Group
                      * Success Is Potential Realized *

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