Constructive Criticism Welcomed!!

[albumin40]

Hello
My initial site was www.miscarriage-ni.org.uk
I made a lot of errors on this one, especially the home page (which I will put right in time)

My second site is www.rvhliversupportgroup.co.uk

I think the lessons I learned in the first site helped me produce a better more user friendly one.

However, this is only my opinion. I would value any criticism, suggestion for improvement etc

Thanks & Regards

[m-ania]

Re: Constructive Criticism Welcomed!!

Very nice site, checked the www.rvhliversupportgroup.co.uk.
I have noticed that 'Fortcoming Events' does not fit quite right on the menu bar. Maybe changing it to 'Upcoming Events' would work? Also, on the bottom of the 'Become a Donor' window, i see 'Click to see how to beco'.
Good luck.

M-ania
www.chandagiftstudio.com

[albumin40]

Re: Constructive Criticism Welcomed!!

Hi M-ania

Very many thanks for the help. I will correct these faults you pointed out.

Kind Regards & Thanks

Albumin40

[philipc9635]

Re: Constructive Criticism Welcomed!!

Hey both sites are extremely worthwhile.

I would consider using a smaller menu bar for the miscarriage site so you can fit it all in. That way you would be able to set the page width to 800.

The second site is very good, looks good and navigates well. You are doing a great job.

[albumin40]

Re: Constructive Criticism Welcomed!!

Thank you Phil. your comments mean a lot to me.

Kind Regards & Thanks