Please review my website.

[avon]

I would like my website critiqued by other members. All comments welcomed
Thanks,
Avon

http://www.nataliesbridal.net

[Conrad L]

Re: Please review my website.

Great, I hope mine looks as good when Im finished

[mwalsh62]

Re: Please review my website.

Hi Avon,

A question; I assume that the "Natalie's Bridal" page is your page, linking to other sites? The first thing you should do is set the links to these other sites to open in a new tab. Any visitors who find your page, then click a link, are gone, with no navigation back to your page!

You might want to feature some of these designs within your own site, as it feels as though you are disconnected from all of these designers, just a road post, if you will. There is no sense that you are really involved.

And, at the very least, you should center your page.

I hope this helps,

[philipc9635]

Re: Please review my website.

Sorry Avon, your page is not displaying at the moment.

[dons1]

Re: Please review my website.

Hi Avon!

I like it, but agree with the improvements that Mike suggests. Also, you have a spelling error in your introduction - 5th row - "clasical designs" - missing an "s".

All the best!
John
www.clanfootball.com - "connecting fans around the world"