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  • tmichetti
    Private First Class

    • Dec 2007
    • 5

    let me know

    here it is my first site ever

  • philipc9635
    Lieutenant Colonel

    • Jul 2006
    • 735

    #2
    Re: let me know

    Hi there

    Sorry your page does not seem to be loading!!!!
    Phil Cartledge (Aussie Phil)

    Discover A Simple Approach To Online Business That Locks In Your Success.

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    • Vasili
      Moderator

      • Mar 2006
      • 14683

      #3
      Re: let me know

      Link is spelled wrong ~ TRY THIS : www.homebritecontracting.com
      . VodaWebs....Luxury Group
      * Success Is Potential Realized *

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      • tmichetti
        Private First Class

        • Dec 2007
        • 5

        #4
        Re: let me know

        sorry didn't notice it was like that and yes the real link is http://www.homebritecontracting.com

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        • Vasili
          Moderator

          • Mar 2006
          • 14683

          #5
          Re: let me know

          Originally posted by tmichetti View Post
          sorry didn't notice it was like that and yes the real link is http://www.homebritecontracting.com


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          . VodaWebs....Luxury Group
          * Success Is Potential Realized *

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          • Jeremy
            Brigadier General

            • Apr 2006
            • 1502

            #6
            Re: let me know

            To my eyes the site has the information you need just looks outdated and lacks graphics.
            Best regards,
            Jeremy

            www.cornwall4rent.com

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            • mwalsh62
              Major

              • Jul 2007
              • 426

              #7
              Re: let me know

              Hi t,

              I have to agree with Jeremy, your page looks like a portal to the early 90's! Don't fret, being your first stab at it, your doing fine. Maybe you should visit other pages by contractors and see what they're doing, find a few you like and use them as inspiration. Think about more text bragging on yourself (sell your business), photos of projects you have done, etc.

              Definitely lose the paint bucket and brush at top, They convey to me that you are going to spill red paint all over my house!

              Keep going, you'll get there!

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              • Andy128
                Major General

                • Dec 2005
                • 2317

                #8
                Re: let me know

                I would suggest a more polished look. When people are outlaying money for construction or painting, they want the confidence that you are serious about the job. Cartoon graphics don't convey that. For levity, you could put one small character on a more polished type site and that would be fine.

                Also- one has to scroll down way too far to find out who you are and how to contact you.

                Might want to consider providing some pictures of jobs you've done- shows confidence and lets the visitor see what scale of job you can handle.

                Just a few thoughts. I would do as suggested above- vist a few other contractor / handyman websites and see what the competition is doing.

                Cheers-

                Andy
                PHP- is a blast!

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                • tmichetti
                  Private First Class

                  • Dec 2007
                  • 5

                  #9
                  Re: let me know

                  tnx for the info i'll do what i can and not to sure if i can change the logo will talk to my dad tho

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