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[Vasili]

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Thanks for the input.

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[jpitts78]

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Any thing else I should change, remove, add?

[Tom vR]

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Hi J,

It looks very good now. I really like the way you design your graphics, very cool. There is not much I can add, but maybe you would like to consider the following as a bonus on your site.

1. On your Links page, you have plenty of text. Nothing wrong with the layout as it is, but click here to see a few scrollable text option, or play with the I-Frame in BV.

2. When you are ready and feel comfortable with its use, then try to replace your Contact option with a Conatcy form. Click here then watch the Forms Part 1 and Part 2 tutorials.

I hope this all helps. Cheers.

Otherewise, excellently done.

[Tom vR]

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2. When you are ready and feel comfortable with its use, then try to replace your Contact option with a Conatcy form. Click here then watch the Forms Part 1 and Part 2 tutorials.

Sorry!!! Spelling error. Must be Contact form. (finger troubles...)

[jenjen101]

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Any thing else I should change, remove, add?

First off,

Love your site! You have done some great things with it. I am a professional copywriter and I noticed a gramar mistake.

On the home page: Paws Up has only recently came about - should be "come about."

On the about us page: I, Joanne Pitts, am the owner and founder of Paws Up. You might say something like, "Hi! I'm Joanne Pitts, owner and founder of Paws UP." Sounds a little less formal and reads a bit smoother.

OMG!!! I love the don't watch me poop T-shirt! that's hysterical. I also like the use of color and bolding on your products page. The gallery is a great idea and a wonderul way to personalize your site. Overall, I really enjoyed looking at your site!

Jenny

[jpitts78]

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Thanks, fixed the home page. I still need to fix the intro on the About page though.