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  • shelz013
    Sergeant

    • Nov 2007
    • 29

    The website is DONE!!! What ya' think?

    I'm finally done with the website for my SIL's business.. I'm kicking myself for wasting my time (and $$) with "another" place. I did in 2 days what I was trying to do for over a month. It only took 2 days bc I have 3 kids;).
    well, ok.. check it out.. tell me what you think.
    http://www.bluemarlinmotors.com
    I still have to do the meta tags, analytics, and submit to search engines, but the hard part is DONE!
    bluemarlinmotors.com
    my3monkeys
  • aussiebaz
    First Lieutenant

    • Jan 2007
    • 175

    #2
    Re: The website is DONE!!! What ya' think?

    Nice ,easay on the eyes site, set out is good.

    One thing, it would look much better if you
    centered the page, at the moment it is hard
    up on the left of screen.

    But hey, a good job

    Barry

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    • DCOFFICESERVICES
      Special Status

      • Oct 2007
      • 480

      #3
      Re: The website is DONE!!! What ya' think?

      Cracking site.. looks really good and loads really well.

      Here are my observations

      1.As Barry mentioned earlier, it would look better centered.
      2.The pages need titles, but I think you know that anyway.
      3.On some of your adverts the text is not fitting the box correctly. Try leaving the price font size as is but reduce the font size of the car name etc.
      4.On the Specials page, try 'justifying' the text. (Squaring it off might make it look neater)
      5. On the 'Terms of Sale' Page, try justifying the text here also.

      These are just little tweaks, to a great job you've already done.

      Darren

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      • lemmondr
        Second Lieutenant

        • Sep 2007
        • 104

        #4
        Re: The website is DONE!!! What ya' think?

        shelz,

        I agree with Darren, some fine tuning and tweeking... I would get an
        "about us" and "contact us" menu bar and talk about yourself to get the customers confidence. Be easy to reach, if a potential customer
        has a question about a vehicle.

        Buying cars as you know is a very emotional purchase, you need to put them as ease. They need to get to know you and feel confident about doing such a large finanical transaction. If you have any satisfied customers, post a testimonials page to increase consumer confidence..

        Keep up the good work!!

        Dan.

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        • shelz013
          Sergeant

          • Nov 2007
          • 29

          #5
          Re: The website is DONE!!! What ya' think?

          Those are awesome suggestions! Thanks!
          Is there a trick to centering the page?
          bluemarlinmotors.com
          my3monkeys

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          • mrmagoo144
            Brigadier General

            • Feb 2007
            • 1369

            #6
            Re: The website is DONE!!! What ya' think?

            there is a tutorial "how to set up page properties" which deals with page naming, backgrounds, seo optimization and centering. Here is the link:
            Video tutorials about how to create an amazing website with the BlueVoda website builder, brought to you by VodaHost web hosting.

            hope this helps,
            mrmagoo144
            mrmagoo144
            www.videopostcards.info

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            • lemmondr
              Second Lieutenant

              • Sep 2007
              • 104

              #7
              Re: The website is DONE!!! What ya' think?

              shelz,

              Right CLICK on the page to bring up the Properties. In the box there's
              is an option to center page in the browser..slect it. Remember, you will need to do this to ALL of your posted pages.

              Dan.

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              • kacienoonan
                Sergeant Major

                • Nov 2007
                • 91

                #8
                Re: The website is almost DONE!!! What ya' think?

                I think everyone is doing really well. I find that font types need to compliment each other and needs to remain consistent. I have some pages with no titles and need to research again how to do that. Also, my home link on my pages will not return me to the index page although it it directed to the index.html page. I am not sure why its not working.

                My website is www.jeffersoncountyhealthdepartmentwv.org Please advise,
                thanks

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                • kacienoonan
                  Sergeant Major

                  • Nov 2007
                  • 91

                  #9
                  Re: The website is DONE!!! What ya' think?

                  Your responses above are very helpful, thanks
                  kc

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                  • Vasili
                    Moderator

                    • Mar 2006
                    • 14683

                    #10
                    Re: The website is DONE!!! What ya' think?

                    Originally posted by kacienoonan View Post
                    Your responses above are very helpful, thanks kc
                    Kacie .... if you seek input from others, you need to create your own thread for review of your website alone.

                    What you are doing here is considered "interrupting" and/or "hijacking" a thread specifically created for review of shelz' website, and is very bad forum decorum to impose upon your peers......
                    . VodaWebs....Luxury Group
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