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    My site is www.whymeshow.com. I think it looks pretty good but I'd like some more opinions. Let me know what you think. Hope you like it. (and if you do i update with new episodes every Friday)
    So when ambition turns into a competition I'll never be the better man.

    Need a break? Watch my Web Show
    http://whymeshow.com

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    Very interesting, but you need to cenet your pages.....Good Luck

    Merry Christmas
    Sharon Chajin

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    • #3
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      I had and still have no clue what the site is for. I would put some info on your home page to give people some info about the site and what its aim is.

      Just my opinion!
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        I tried the link but it gave me an error message that the website could not be found.



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          Not able to check it out, page error comes up when I try to get in.
          Marcie
          www.redtractorfarm.com
          www.iloveacorns.com
          www.halfkilofeta.com

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            Figured out why we weren't getting in: this is what is appearing in address bar when we hit the link you have provided here.


            You need to eliminate some dead space at the top of your pages so that
            your menu bars and buttons are visible without scrolling down. Keep in mind what your pages look like when opened in a smaller window and you'll see what I mean.
            Marcie
            www.redtractorfarm.com
            www.iloveacorns.com
            www.halfkilofeta.com

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              hi there ... I think it looks pretty good too ... but I can only assume it is a game of some sort you are inviting people to play .. the index page needs to be an introduction to the website ... letting people know who you are, what is going on here... etc ... I consider the index page to be a grab page ... it is your first and only shot to keep your visitors ... good luck
              kym, merlin & tala
              creating white majick
              www.whiteshepherds.com.au
              www.unitedwhiteshepherds.com.au
              www.merlinsmajick.com
              www.kymdunbar.com

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                Thanks for all the tips. I'll work on putting them in for my next update..and it's really just a web show..a drama..that I created using a game. wanted to put it out there for people to watch. Should be a working link in my signature now btw. Thanks again for all the tips.
                So when ambition turns into a competition I'll never be the better man.

                Need a break? Watch my Web Show
                http://whymeshow.com

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                  I've made several changes to the index page and a few other changes as well. Thanks again for all your help.
                  So when ambition turns into a competition I'll never be the better man.

                  Need a break? Watch my Web Show
                  http://whymeshow.com

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                    Make sure that you title all your pages.. the episodes page still show untitled.
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