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  • jonjsimon1
    Private

    • Jan 2008
    • 2

    Website for review

    Please review my website and critque as you feel necessary. The domain is www.bhbofne.com
    Thank you for your time and consideration!
  • angstless
    First Sergeant

    • Dec 2007
    • 72

    #2
    Re: Website for review

    You certainly have a good eye for design, I recon that is why you are in the building industry. I can think of nothing constructive to say...seems you done it all!

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    • jonjsimon1
      Private

      • Jan 2008
      • 2

      #3
      Re: Website for review

      angstless,

      Thank you for your reply, I was beginning to think that I messed something up! I appreciate your time!

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      • karel
        Brigadier General

        • Feb 2006
        • 1178

        #4
        Re: Website for review

        Hi here are a few things I would do....

        Firstly the menu bar would be better on the left hand side where the other text is and not stuck on your banner. Are you linking the text on the left hand side, if not it wants to be in your main body of text, it is confusing as I thought these were links. I would also place it on a lighter background, it looks more professional and is easier to read.

        Not sure why you have the quick links option to see the weather, google etc, why would you want to take them away from your site?

        I would bring your text down from your banner also, it looks far too close. Also you need to title your pages.

        One or two other things but I will leave you with those thoughts.

        Good luck with your site and well done on the start.

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        • Hester
          Captain

          • Jun 2006
          • 206

          #5
          Re: Website for review

          I think you did a nice job on your site. I would suggest possibly putting a "back" button or something of the sort on the sub-pages (boathouse, composite, etc.) of the "Project" page. That's just my opinion of what I think would make the navigation just a tad smoother.

          I also think it's a great start. :) keep it up.
          George
          www.virtuosocreative.com

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          • whiteshepherd
            Brigadier General

            • Apr 2007
            • 1341

            #6
            Re: Website for review

            I really like what you have done ... it has a great feel to it ... I agree with Karel's points ... also I think your pages are far too wide ... especially for the amount of centent contained within them .... usually we stick to a wideth of between 800 to 1000 max ... then entre the pages in the browser ...

            To help search engine optimisation all your pages need unitue names to describe the pages ... you access this by right clicking on an empty part of the page and selecting page propteries.

            I wonder how your pages would look with the dark grey as the background rather than the light grey? just a thought ...

            keep up the good work ...
            kym, merlin & tala
            creating white majick
            www.whiteshepherds.com.au
            www.unitedwhiteshepherds.com.au
            www.merlinsmajick.com
            www.kymdunbar.com

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            • marria
              Private

              • Dec 2007
              • 3

              #7
              Re: Website for review

              i have visited your site, it is a nice job. i like it
              Good luck to you

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