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  • Marincky
    General

    • Apr 2006
    • 4539

    Pink Panther Party Bus

    All comments welcome...

    Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.
  • Jeremy
    Brigadier General

    • Apr 2006
    • 1502

    #2
    Re: Pink Panther Party Bus

    Love the pink bus Ramsey! haha
    Best regards,
    Jeremy

    www.cornwall4rent.com

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    • Marincky
      General

      • Apr 2006
      • 4539

      #3
      Re: Pink Panther Party Bus

      Originally posted by Jeremy View Post
      Love the pink bus Ramsey! haha
      LOL, ok ok thanks to Jeremy for my 'cut out' bus!
      Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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      • acejase
        Sergeant Major

        • Nov 2007
        • 87

        #4
        Re: Pink Panther Party Bus

        lol, i wanted to hop on when i read the name

        have you got pinker?

        jason

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        • sedona
          Major General

          • Jun 2007
          • 2177

          #5
          Re: Pink Panther Party Bus

          Hi Ramsey,

          For a pretty straightforward local business I think it does a good job of telling pretty much the whole story on the index page. Of course the colour choices are appropriate.

          You might want to have a little info about deposits, payment options somewhere.

          Good job as usual!
          Ken

          If there hadn't been women we'd still be squatting in a cave eating raw meat, because we made civilization in order to impress our girl friends. And they tolerated it and let us go ahead and play with our toys. Orson Wells

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          • Marincky
            General

            • Apr 2006
            • 4539

            #6
            Re: Pink Panther Party Bus

            Originally posted by sedona View Post
            Hi Ramsey,

            For a pretty straightforward local business I think it does a good job of telling pretty much the whole story on the index page. Of course the colour choices are appropriate.

            You might want to have a little info about deposits, payment options somewhere.

            Good job as usual!
            Thank You

            I didn't get much info from the client on this one. But I will chase him up as I agree this would be a good addition.
            Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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            • SAman
              Major General

              • Mar 2007
              • 2009

              #7
              Re: Pink Panther Party Bus

              Hey Ramsey,
              The site is great, not only catchy and humorus, but informative.
              But one question from a person on the other side of the pond,,,,,
              What is a "HEN NIGHT"?
              Mike

              Any excuse for non performance only weakens the charactor

              In God We Trust

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              • Marincky
                General

                • Apr 2006
                • 4539

                #8
                Re: Pink Panther Party Bus

                A hen night is a group of girls on a night out on the towm celebrating the forthcoming marriage of one of the party members.

                A stag night is exactly the same but for the groom
                Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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                • SAman
                  Major General

                  • Mar 2007
                  • 2009

                  #9
                  Re: Pink Panther Party Bus

                  Thanks, I feel so enlightened now. (Almost international)
                  Mike

                  Any excuse for non performance only weakens the charactor

                  In God We Trust

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                  • slick1121
                    Major

                    • Feb 2008
                    • 274

                    #10
                    Re: Pink Panther Party Bus

                    Ramsey

                    I have to echo the comments.... good correlation with webname and colors. Also very catchy hook (American marketing lingo for getting the buyer's attention)... right at the top.

                    I know exactly what the business is... no guessing. The link for more information does well in personalizing the story.... very good.

                    I would probably add a little more pitch on the front page... not much since you do not want to go over the top. For example add some key phrase like "Travel in Luxury" right before you mention what is in the limo bus. Key phrasing will help link ideas on the page.

                    Perhaps move around some of the components of the page.... see if you can reduce some of the white space and help with the flow.

                    Remove the word "though"- it is negative term.

                    However, a very good start with good graphics, color, story, etc.
                    Bravo, well done.

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                    • Marincky
                      General

                      • Apr 2006
                      • 4539

                      #11
                      Re: Pink Panther Party Bus

                      Thanks Slick, nice comments. I'll have a rellok at the comments you made and see what can be done. Cheers
                      Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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                      • MADinMelbourne
                        Second Lieutenant

                        • Dec 2007
                        • 115

                        #12
                        Re: Pink Panther Party Bus

                        Was waiting to hear the panther music!!! Great looking site, really easy to navigate... I'm sure you already know there's no link to the photo's which was disappointing 'cos I wanted to see more photo's. Ditto to more of the personalised story on the front page with the one liners down the bottom. Great work.
                        www.madinmelbourne.com.au
                        the ART of Making A Difference

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