Please review my new site

[pete146]

Hi

This is my first post, as this is the 1st site I've ever attempted to build. I've just set it all up this morning for a modelling friend of mine. I'd love to know what you think, and what I could have done better.

http://www.hayleysteuernol.com/

Thanks
Pete146

[alas]

Re: Please review my new site

Hi,
you have been very good to be this your first website and just done it in one day.
Suggestions?
Maybe you should put a title in each page, and for the gallery I would use the light box, it will give a more professional look to the pictures.
Then I would make a contact form instead of the email address.
There is the ABVFP form which looks a bit complicated, but it is a great feature.
In the BIO page there is a spelling error on " WELCOME"
Good work
Ciao
Alas

[pete146]

Re: Please review my new site

Hi

Thanks very much.

I thought I had put a title on each page? & the gallerys are all made with lightbox. One thing I have notices is that if you click a thumbnail before the full page has loaded, the lightbox functionality doesn't work!

Sorry - what's ABVFP?

And thanks for pointing out the typo! lol

Thanks again

[pete146]

Re: Please review my new site

Worked out what I 'd done wrong with the titles, thanks. Think they're fixed now.

[sedona]

Re: Please review my new site

Hi Pete,

Very nice, clean functional site. Well designed and pleasing to the eye. One day? Wow!
I'm a fan of pages that can be seen without scrolling in any direction. You have centered it well horizontally but if you were to bring it down just a bit there should be enough room for a little space both above and below it as in my browser it runs up to the top of my viewing area. Would look cleaner imo. Just an idea.
Good luck!

[Collectors-info]

Re: Please review my new site

Hi, your off to a good start & the feel & style of the site is fine. The portfolio & the flash intro are nice idea’s, but have to be done well for this style of site. You can’t have images with crinkly edges & looking pixilated (thumbnails). I would have thought the model would have had a good portfolio of images that could have been used on the site & placed in an album like jalbum or similar.

Good luck.

[alas]

Re: Please review my new site

Hi

Thanks very much.

ISorry - what's ABVFP?


Thanks again

Hi Pete, that is the form I have mentioned before check it here:

http://www.vodahost.com/vodatalk/news-updates/12852-advanced-bluevoda-form-processor.html

Saluti
Alas

[jkadin]

Re: Please review my new site

well done thats all i can say are you sure this is a first keep up the good work

[MADinMelbourne]

Re: Please review my new site

Great, nice color selection, easy to navigate, the photo's look great... the only thing I could see to change was leaving a gap at the bottom, same as you've done at the top. Thumbs UP!

[sedona]

Re: Please review my new site

Great, nice color selection, easy to navigate, the photo's look great... the only thing I could see to change was leaving a gap at the bottom, same as you've done at the top. Thumbs UP!

Hi Pete,

Yes you haven't gotten it quite centered vertically. Sometimes this sort of thing takes a bit of playing with.

Excellent work though!