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  • Marincky
    General

    • Apr 2006
    • 4539

    Website For Review



    I LOVE BV... it just does EVERYTHING it says on the tin!!...

    All comments, criticisms, gramattical errors etc welcome. I Promise I do act upon the serious ones
    Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.
  • mattski
    First Sergeant

    • Jan 2008
    • 78

    #2
    Re: Website For Review

    Looks pretty good, I like the layout.

    I would go through and make sure all the place names in the "We cover the following areas:" section are capitalized appropriately. There are a few lower case names. Also in the "Wedding Limousine Hire" section the word lifes should be changed to lives.

    One other suggestion would be to add the phone number in each of the sections where you say "call for a FREE quote" or have a link to your Enquiries page since you also provide a quote there.
    Mattski

    http://www.ScorpioFire.com


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    • Andy128
      Major General

      • Dec 2005
      • 2317

      #3
      Re: Website For Review

      As always- nice job Ramsey.


      Cheers-
      Andy
      PHP- is a blast!

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      • PlayItByBeer
        Lieutenant Colonel

        • Mar 2007
        • 653

        #4
        Re: Website For Review

        Hi Ramsey,

        Looking Good.

        A small one on the bookings page:
        "fell free" should be "feel free"

        Cheers,
        Andrew

        sigpic

        Port Elizabeth Web Design Solutions
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        • Marincky
          General

          • Apr 2006
          • 4539

          #5
          Re: Website For Review

          and there lies the lesson in why you shouldn't rush a site! I must admit I knocked this one up this morning, it was a rush job.

          Thanks to all above who spotted spelling mistakes, capitilisation errors etc etc. All fixed now.
          Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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          • nitasch
            Sergeant

            • Feb 2008
            • 21

            #6
            Re: Website For Review

            "Hen Party"? lol

            Nice site
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            http://www.schindlerroofing.com

            http://www.schindlersoftball.com

            http://www.schindlerphotos.com

            http://www.CCRutah.net (just starting this one)

            http://www.clearfieldthunder.com

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            • Marincky
              General

              • Apr 2006
              • 4539

              #7
              Re: Website For Review

              I don't think this is a term known to you guys, but Hen Party is something the bride and her female friends attend the night before her marriage.
              Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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              • Tom vR
                Brigadier General

                • Apr 2007
                • 1731

                #8
                Re: Website For Review

                Nice site Ramsey,
                On your Gallery are some pictures not resized with PixResizer. Some over 300kb and 500kb causing slow opening.
                Bless you
                Tom

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                • whiteshepherd
                  Brigadier General

                  • Apr 2007
                  • 1341

                  #9
                  Re: Website For Review

                  Originally posted by Marincky View Post
                  I don't think this is a term known to you guys, but Hen Party is something the bride and her female friends attend the night before her marriage.
                  sorry to correct your grammar Ramsey but it is Hen's Party and Hen's Nights ... etc ... the hen is possessive of the nights and party ... Only had a quick look but it is looking good for a morning's work ... lol ... on the front page it says Website Design & Build by ... it should be Website Design & Built by ... ?
                  kym, merlin & tala
                  creating white majick
                  www.whiteshepherds.com.au
                  www.unitedwhiteshepherds.com.au
                  www.merlinsmajick.com
                  www.kymdunbar.com

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                  • Collectors-info
                    General

                    • Feb 2006
                    • 8703

                    #10
                    Re: Website For Review

                    Hi, looking good Ramsey. Couple of adjustments may help.
                    The Red Dargues logo need dropping down for FF users.
                    Some of the gallery images seem a little odd, in that some are 33kb thumbnails & stay that way & others are 560kb thumbnails & stay that way as well???? (In KB’s)
                    On the Download book a limousine form, you can set this up on a web page so the user can enter there details online & then print it out for a signature to be then posted to you. Can save trying to decipher hand writing sometimes & i think users would like it.

                    Good luck.
                    Regards Chris.

                    Collectables, Collecting, collectors-info.com

                    www.chrismorris.co.uk

                    House build project

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                    • AJ113
                      Special Status

                      • May 2007
                      • 332

                      #11
                      Re: Website For Review

                      Sorry Whiteshepherd, you no more say "hen's night" than you would "stag's night." (in the UK at least). "Hen night" is correct.

                      Ramsey - 'North East' instead of 'North east'?

                      Otherwise, good job.

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                      • Marincky
                        General

                        • Apr 2006
                        • 4539

                        #12
                        Re: Website For Review

                        Kym

                        AJ is correct in that what I have put 'Hen Nights' is correct over here anyway, but thank you anyway.

                        Tom and Chris

                        At the moment, the client had some large images and some very small images but wanted them in a gallery, so yes some of them open large, some small.

                        I must admit to doing this a bit too quick and will go back and look at the very large ones that are taking time and redo them thank you.

                        The client is supposed to be providing me with a complete new set soon anyway. It was really done just to get something on the page.

                        Chris I will look at the logo in FF and act accordingly. Once again, I usually do this, but just so busy it's crazy!!!

                        Same with the limo booking form, I am sure at some point I will redo this.

                        The trouble is my client has a very expensive car and no work. He had three sites built in the past by other webmasters and none of them worked before, but then if you saw the other sites you would understand why. Hence why I have to get him up and running quickly.
                        Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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                        • Marincky
                          General

                          • Apr 2006
                          • 4539

                          #13
                          Re: Website For Review

                          Chris,

                          I have just compared the site in FF and blimey... you are so right...

                          Now the trouble is, I can move the logo but look at the border, it's all out of line at the top and bottom!

                          Can you advise me on this. Out of every site I have made this is the first to not look equal in both browsers so not had much experience with this issue.

                          If I move the top line up (which needs doing) it will be too high in IE...

                          Any advice?
                          Don't aim for success if you want it; just do what you love and believe in, and it will come naturally.

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                          • SAman
                            Major General

                            • Mar 2007
                            • 2009

                            #14
                            Re: Website For Review

                            Ramsey,
                            For just knocking it out in a morning I wish I could do so good.
                            It looks really good. OHH I had to have that Hen Night expained to me before. On this side of the pond, we don't hear that.
                            Good luck!!
                            Mike

                            Any excuse for non performance only weakens the charactor

                            In God We Trust

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                            • jkadin
                              Brigadier General

                              • Jan 2008
                              • 1478

                              #15
                              Re: Website For Review

                              Nice looking site everything that i could see looks fine except that maybe in england its called whilst out and about in america its called while out and about maybe its a small error or thats how its done in england good luck with the site its on the gallery page i'm talking about
                              sigpicJoe
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