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  • Tripleactionoutdoors
    Sergeant

    • Nov 2007
    • 27

    I need some critics!

    Here is my website check it out and let me know what needs changing and what would make it more proffesional.

  • angstless
    First Sergeant

    • Dec 2007
    • 72

    #2
    Re: I need some critics!

    You are like me on my first try...

    first of all..make sure EVERY PAGE HAS A LINK TO THE OTHER PAGES..you force me to use the back button cause your alternate pages have no links.

    Use your header on every page..oh and that hoot owl..damn..took me a few moments to understand it was not a skeletal remain of some dinosaur or gator..AND it makes me scroll sideways cause the owl pic is too wide.

    and in the 'contact part'...in your text link you can highlight any part of the text and post a link to that text..try to in order to make the link a true email link.

    good luck..hunting might become a staple for some peoples meals these days?

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    • beegud2
      Major General

      • Apr 2006
      • 2156

      #3
      Re: I need some critics!

      Hi,

      Agree with angstless and here are a few more. Make sure you titles in each box are cnetered. Center your pages and this can be done in BV by going into page properties by right clicking on the page. Might consider a different font on the last box at the bottom as it was a bitt difficult to read. Although I'm using the Camino browser for MAC so that could be causing it. Other than that.. a good start and I wish you all the best with you site and business.
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      • PlayItByBeer
        Lieutenant Colonel

        • Mar 2007
        • 653

        #4
        Re: I need some critics!

        Hi Triple Action,

        Poor Bambi
        Andrew

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        • PlayItByBeer
          Lieutenant Colonel

          • Mar 2007
          • 653

          #5
          Re: I need some critics!

          Originally posted by PlayItByBeer View Post
          Hi Triple Action,

          Poor Bambi
          Just kidding, here are a couple of comments:
          • The music on about us took a really long time to load.
          • The Navigation around your site is not user friendly.
          • Centre align pages
          • Rename page titles to keyword rich titles
          • Be carefull of displaying your email address (make use of contact us form or save address as a .jpg file and then add it)
          Cheers,
          Andrew

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          Port Elizabeth Web Design Solutions
          Latest Release: Eastern Cape Hunting Safaris
          Work In Progress Cape Town Dietician
          BlueVoda Web Design Portfolio

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          • SAman
            Major General

            • Mar 2007
            • 2009

            #6
            Re: I need some critics!

            Hey TAO,
            You have a good start. I ditto the remarks above and I would add you should resize your pics, there are some that are huge files to load. Also try and keep the font of your text consistant on at least the same page. You just need to start tweaking, ofcourse there is almost no end to the tweaking. Good Luck!!
            Mike

            Any excuse for non performance only weakens the charactor

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