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  • frediabowers
    Corporal

    • Apr 2008
    • 19

    Tell Me What You Think

    This is my first website I have created from stratch. Please take a look and tell me what you think of it. Tell if my links are working and what you think my layout. Tell what improvements I can make to my website, www.naughtybasketssstore.com. Do you have any ideas about advertising with little or no money. Just a little warning my site contains adult products and novelties!!
  • lemmondr
    Second Lieutenant

    • Sep 2007
    • 104

    #2
    Re: Tell Me What You Think

    Fredia,

    You and your daughter have a pretty good start here. I would put a Form on your Contact Page. I would come up with a different coloer scheme...(pink is nice..but you have too much)..it doesnt really work with the Grey Menu Bar. Spell/Grammer check your FAQ, it looks pretty rough.

    Your About Us I feel should like below:

    The Naughty Baskets Store is an online store for anyone looking to put a little spice back into their relationship. We feature adult novelties and adult novelty Gift Baskets upon request. We are a small Mother and Daughter team that started out making adult novelty baskets for our friends and family. We found we enjoyed it so much we have taken our joy of making novelty baskets to the internet. We hope you’ll let us put the same care into your basket and take Naughty Baskets along for your special occasion.

    Best of Luck!

    Daniel-

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    • lemmondr
      Second Lieutenant

      • Sep 2007
      • 104

      #3
      Re: Tell Me What You Think

      Hey Gang!

      Here's the proper link http://www.naughtybasketsstore.com/

      Daniel-

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      • PlayItByBeer
        Lieutenant Colonel

        • Mar 2007
        • 653

        #4
        Re: Tell Me What You Think

        Hi frediabowers,

        Naughty but nice site LOL and a fun site to post a review on...
        • The link below your 'rabbits' is hidden behind the bar
        • There is a hidden link (www getmy...) behind the bar below your logo.
        • Page Titles - Have a look at Beth's great SEO ebook
        • The 'pink on pink' coloured links are difficult to read.
        • I don't think the top 'nav buttons' fit the rest of your page IMO have a look at the loads of other color variations or you can make your own by color picking from your own page.
        Cheers,
        Andrew

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        • PlayItByBeer
          Lieutenant Colonel

          • Mar 2007
          • 653

          #5
          Re: Tell Me What You Think

          Back again...

          The above mentioned link below the "rabbits" is dead (the page you saved in BV has capital letters and link is small letters)

          Cheers,
          Andrew

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          • zuriatman
            Moderator

            • Sep 2006
            • 3025

            #6
            Re: Tell Me What You Think

            I was under the impression that VodaHost does not permit
            such sites on their servers?

            VodaHost TOS

            Quote:

            "
            2.4) Adult Sites

            Due to various legal and moral implications. VodaHost does not permit sexually explicit material on any of its servers."
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