Please review my site

[pedsam]

It would please me to have you all review my site.

https://www.secretrelease.com

account ID#23964

[Lcoisas]

Re: Please review my site

Hi pedsam,

You have a very good looking site, pleasent at first sight.

Just a few note:

- you should center all your pages at same place. When we go trough all your site, there is an oscilation between them, because they aren't placed evenly.

Good luck to your site.

Susana

[PlayItByBeer]

Re: Please review my site

Welcome Pedro,

A couple of comments to consider:

• your home page template is stretched to the right compared to your other pages
• the action link seems to be a form response page (???)

Cheers,

[Collectors-info]

Re: Please review my site

Hi Pedro,
i see you solved the problem with the images (well done) Sites looking great & real easy to navigate. Can only see one tiny thing. The header image has a different url on each page & is a little large @ 250kb for a header image, so tends to slow down each page on 1st time loading. How did you put this image on the page???

[Vasili]

Site Needs Attention To Basics!

Yes, as mentioned, you have created a "Menu" item with your email form 'action' page .... clearly a disconnect with the concept of how to create a proper email function. I would suggest a very slow and careful re-reading of the instructions.....

Secondly, some others have mentioned some of the obvious tech issues, but the thing that caught my attention quite rapidly is the quantum shift from the 'first impression' (no matter the degree) to a sudden lowering of standards that should be present in a "business-oriented" website: never use the colloquilism "cool" in any manner whatsoever! Even if you are trying to keep things "light" and current-sounding, it is something that telegraphs a dichotomy that becomes too in-credible to ignore .... makes you look like you are reaching too high, or are posturing rather than proudly presenting......(in my opinion, of course!)

And, be very sure about the Contact information you publish on the internet: it is best to keep addresses and telephone numbers commercial rather than residential --- for obvious reasons.

[SAman]

Re: Please review my site

Hi pesam,
This is a clean looking site, but the pages don't look centered, the home and cantact pages are too wide and look off. On the "2." item I think you ment to say know, not known. did you use the handles on the pic to fit it in, it looks a little squished. this is just my view on it. Good luck!

[leoscats]

Re: Please review my site

Nice looking site

[pedsam]

Re: Please review my site

Thanks for the critique.
The image was place on the page by downloading it to my computer and then copy and paste.

[lisafwg]

first sentence

You need to change this:
"We are a web based company that markets the opportunity of making money at home we have a business opportunity with low cost start up fees."

This is a run on sentence. Make it 2 sentences.

You should consider more content.

Good luck