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  • pedsam
    Private

    • Apr 2008
    • 2

    Please review my site

    It would please me to have you all review my site.



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  • Lcoisas
    Major

    • May 2007
    • 314

    #2
    Re: Please review my site

    Hi pedsam,

    You have a very good looking site, pleasent at first sight.

    Just a few note:

    - you should center all your pages at same place. When we go trough all your site, there is an oscilation between them, because they aren't placed evenly.

    Good luck to your site.

    Susana
    Susana

    http://www.imperiodocha.com
    Leaf Tea & Acessories
    http://www.christiescreations.net
    Gift Baskets, Flowers and Party Favors for all occasions
    Richmond, VA

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    • PlayItByBeer
      Lieutenant Colonel

      • Mar 2007
      • 653

      #3
      Re: Please review my site

      Welcome Pedro,

      A couple of comments to consider:
      • your home page template is stretched to the right compared to your other pages
      • the action link seems to be a form response page (???)
      Cheers,
      Andrew

      sigpic

      Port Elizabeth Web Design Solutions
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      • Collectors-info
        General

        • Feb 2006
        • 8703

        #4
        Re: Please review my site

        Hi Pedro,
        i see you solved the problem with the images (well done) Sites looking great & real easy to navigate. Can only see one tiny thing. The header image has a different url on each page & is a little large @ 250kb for a header image, so tends to slow down each page on 1st time loading. How did you put this image on the page???
        Regards Chris.

        Collectables, Collecting, collectors-info.com

        www.chrismorris.co.uk

        House build project

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        • Vasili
          Moderator

          • Mar 2006
          • 14683

          #5
          Site Needs Attention To Basics!

          Yes, as mentioned, you have created a "Menu" item with your email form 'action' page .... clearly a disconnect with the concept of how to create a proper email function. I would suggest a very slow and careful re-reading of the instructions.....

          Secondly, some others have mentioned some of the obvious tech issues, but the thing that caught my attention quite rapidly is the quantum shift from the 'first impression' (no matter the degree) to a sudden lowering of standards that should be present in a "business-oriented" website: never use the colloquilism "cool" in any manner whatsoever! Even if you are trying to keep things "light" and current-sounding, it is something that telegraphs a dichotomy that becomes too in-credible to ignore .... makes you look like you are reaching too high, or are posturing rather than proudly presenting......(in my opinion, of course!)

          And, be very sure about the Contact information you publish on the internet: it is best to keep addresses and telephone numbers commercial rather than residential --- for obvious reasons.
          . VodaWebs....Luxury Group
          * Success Is Potential Realized *

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          • SAman
            Major General

            • Mar 2007
            • 2009

            #6
            Re: Please review my site

            Hi pesam,
            This is a clean looking site, but the pages don't look centered, the home and cantact pages are too wide and look off. On the "2." item I think you ment to say know, not known. did you use the handles on the pic to fit it in, it looks a little squished. this is just my view on it. Good luck!
            Mike

            Any excuse for non performance only weakens the charactor

            In God We Trust

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            • leoscats
              Staff Sergeant

              • Apr 2008
              • 42

              #7
              Re: Please review my site

              Nice looking site

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              • pedsam
                Private

                • Apr 2008
                • 2

                #8
                Re: Please review my site

                Thanks for the critique.
                The image was place on the page by downloading it to my computer and then copy and paste.

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                • lisafwg
                  Private

                  • Apr 2008
                  • 3

                  #9
                  first sentence

                  You need to change this:
                  "We are a web based company that markets the opportunity of making money at home we have a business opportunity with low cost start up fees."

                  This is a run on sentence. Make it 2 sentences.

                  You should consider more content.

                  Good luck



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