Beckys Gems - Help Me Grow Please

[meggabecca]

Hi Girls and Guys

My site has been up and running now for a week, any comments would be much aprehiated. Any negative or positive feedback would be fantastic, you can check my site out at http://www.beckysgems.co.uk

Hey and thanks for looking.

[Karen Mac]

Re: Beckys Gems - Help Me Grow Please

Im wondering why you chose a template with a dog on it to sell jewelry? Not quite what i expected or would have chosen.

Karen

[cathrn]

Re: Beckys Gems - Help Me Grow Please

What a lot of work! I would center the pages (right click on page, page properties then check the box at the bottom). Didn't mind the dog for the logo, but would like to see him wearing a necklace (or a tiara). Nice layout. Some of the copy is a little wordy. There are places you could get away with bullet points instead of sentences. Display of Products button could just read 'products'. I like the mouse over enlargements (wish I knew how to do that). Cool stuff too, hope you do well.

[Marincky]

Re: Beckys Gems - Help Me Grow Please

Im wondering why you chose a template with a dog on it to sell jewelry? Not quite what i expected or would have chosen.

Karen

Yep, have to agree with Karen, the choice of the dog image is rather strange?

[jkadin]

Re: Beckys Gems - Help Me Grow Please

Nice looking site I got to agree about the dog it does not fit in. one thing thats also got to be looked at how you name your page titles come up with a keyword thats on the page for a example your product page title is products thats not going to be good for the search engines throw in a key word or two, A best way do to this look at a similar site likes yours to get an idea. Also which has been mentioned about centering your pages your off to a good start good luck with it.

Joe
www.anytime-figurines.com

https://www.jkteddybear.com

[philipc9635]

Re: Beckys Gems - Help Me Grow Please

Hi Becky

Yes the dog has to go!! I would consider Justifying the text on your home page as it gives a slightly more professional look.

All the best

[leoscats]

Re: Beckys Gems - Help Me Grow Please

Nice site,
Try consistency in your jewelry shop, the roll over idea is nice, a couple only show bigger pictures

[whiteshepherd]

Re: Beckys Gems - Help Me Grow Please

nice website ... well done ... I see the dog has gone ...

[Pickels]

Re: Beckys Gems - Help Me Grow Please

Nice Job

[jetgirl]

Re: Beckys Gems - Help Me Grow Please

Your site looks very professional except I think "Jewellery" should be spelled "Jewelry"
also I would change the wording to ..
Get Your Lastest Fashion and Costume Jewelry Here!
It would fit better into the space..
Jetgirl

[Mac22]

Re: Beckys Gems - Help Me Grow Please

Jewellery is spelt just fine for us UK English speaker/spellers!

Site is looking good. One criticism - there is an awful lot to read on the front page. Is it all really necessary? Especially as some of that same text is repeated in your About Us page. One thing..Beckys Gems I noticed you used Gems's in the clientele page - that 2nd "s" should be removed and just leave the apostrophe.

Great work so far.