ok have a lookie>>>>>

[siccs]

I have 2 websites if done check em out let me know wat u think..
www.thehiphopstudio.com
www.siccsshots.com

thanks

[nzbr]

Re: ok have a lookie>>>>>

Hi siccs,

I had a quick look in both sites. Here is what I think:

1) Nice concept but I don't like the type of font you are using (the dark blue one). When you click on your 'rates' page the font you use there is much clearer and easier to read. Why don't you use this one on the landing page as well? I know it's not that 'funky' but people would get the message faster.

2) Don't like the 'enter' page. I think you should skip it and go directly to your main page. Again, it's just my personal opinion: it's just a waste of time.

Cheers,

[siccs]

Re: ok have a lookie>>>>>

ok great thanks for your input!!!!!!!

[jkadin]

Re: ok have a lookie>>>>>

Your First site off to a good start needs to be centered. Your second site that first page you get to get rid of it. On your music page needs a title comes up untiled, pages are way to wide need to be anywhere from 800-1000, when you click on the menu bar for shirts up pops click here for shirts te less clicking a customer does the better, your advertising clothing yet you got a advertisement for volkwagons, also needs menu bars on all pages,also needs to be centered. Advertising clothing only with 4 shirts noting else you realy need to sort tis site out its bad not a good start on this site.

[siccs]

Re: ok have a lookie>>>>>

Ya i think im gunna redo the clothing co. one but thanks for your input