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  • Pickeringtonguide
    Private

    • Jun 2008
    • 1

    My new website - please review

    just finished my site - any feedback would be appreciated

    www.pickeringtonguide.com

    Thank you.
  • jkadin
    Brigadier General

    • Jan 2008
    • 1478

    #2
    Re: My new website - please review

    Well all that I can say your off to a great start just some minor adjustments. First you need to center your pages, I would put the voda banner towards te bottom of te page you want your customers to look at your site out of the gate, got to name your pages different use a keyword or keyword phase your submit advent page needs adjustments lot of empty space then towards the bottom of that page your links are way off the site. Other than that well done.
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    • zuriatman
      Moderator

      • Sep 2006
      • 3025

      #3
      Re: My new website - please review

      Hi Joe,

      Very nicely done. The only comment is the flower pollen image is over stretched and does not look *****.

      It is better to use a larger image and reduce the size to fit than to use a smaller image and overstretch it.
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      • Sunchaser
        First Lieutenant

        • Nov 2007
        • 199

        #4
        Re: My new website - please review

        Hi

        Looks wonderful!
        The elements and colours all work together.

        Am assuming the picture of the flower will go as soon as you get advertising for that spot - just ensure that whatever images you put there have a much better resolution.

        As said above, the site needs centering (tick the 'centre in browser' button in Page Properties on every page of your site.)

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        • goldpaw
          Second Lieutenant

          • May 2008
          • 137

          #5
          Re: My new website - please review

          WOW! I would say for a first website, you have a done a grand job......
          only critique would be the same as above.. Thanks for submitting
          P V WebSolutions

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          • DCOFFICESERVICES
            Special Status

            • Oct 2007
            • 480

            #6
            Re: My new website - please review

            Looks great. Some minor adjusting that's already been mentioned. Good luck with it.

            Darren

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            • Thumpmonkey
              Second Lieutenant

              • Jan 2008
              • 105

              #7
              Re: My new website - please review

              I think it looks pretty good. A couple things I think would make it look more professional would be to use the same font and font size throughout the site, Have the headers one size, content another, and so-on. Logo's and graphics are excused.

              The titles in the Nav buttons should be uniform, either Capitalize the 1st letter of each title, or don't.

              One last thing, and this is just one of my personal preferences. I'm a big fan of the Full align (Justify in BV) for content. It makes everything look more clean and magaziney.

              As far as anything else, I think everything was mentioned earlier.
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              • SAman
                Major General

                • Mar 2007
                • 2009

                #8
                Re: My new website - please review

                Very well done!! Looks like you have gone back and centered the pages. Was it intentional to alternate the capital letters on your link buttons at the top. as mentioned above? When you have some more advertisers locally then you could move the Voda host link to the bottom, that spot is prime space for a big advertiser. Good Luck!!!!
                Mike

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                • philipc9635
                  Lieutenant Colonel

                  • Jul 2006
                  • 735

                  #9
                  Re: My new website - please review

                  Hey Great Job, Site is looking fantastic.

                  As someone has said I would use a capital to start the Nav Bar Headings.

                  Well done so far.
                  Phil Cartledge (Aussie Phil)

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