A website that might change your life

[scdsuccess]

Hello everyone

I am actually to scared to ask for comments, on my first designed website, but I am ready for any help, comments and feedback on it.

I never thought in a million years that the day would come for me to create a website....But BV made it possible.

http://www.urthemissingpiece.com

When you log in, please just put a "R" behind your name so that I know that your rewieving my site.

Thanks

[Andy128]

Re: A website that might change your life

It looks good. I don't often say that about the traditional "get rich quick" type sites. But this one doesn't fit that mold.......exactly.

Colors and lay out are good. I would say that the giant "I want to enroll permantently" buttons on one of the pages looks cheesy compared to the rest of the site.

MAJOR POINT HERE- the search engines aren't even going to touch your site with the meta keywords you have. You will be serverly penalized for that. You didn't enter keywords- you entered a dictionary.
Look up Bethers in the forum and download her SEO book. It will be a major help.

Title- your opening page the title is "Welcome" How about "Welcome to Success University"

Other than that- it looks good. Good luck.

Andy

[bysandra]

Re: A website that might change your life

Colours look good, I am only prepared to look at the front page though. I don't mind giving out my hotmail address sometimes, but only if something interests me enough to deal with going on a marketing list.
Just a grammar correction....... it is 'details aren't correct' or 'detail isn't correct' (left hand side above your skype info)
Congratulations on building your first website. I know what a great feeling that is.

[nosweatfinance]

Re: A website that might change your life

Gday,

I am really, really jealous. This site is fabulous. I love the layout, the colours. I would only change the picture of the Sef, your advocate with someone who looks a bit more cheerful.

Please tell me how long it took you to do this? I am struggling big time.

[nzbr]

Re: A website that might change your life

Hi there,
Liked the page but didn't get the reason for that green square on the very end of it - right side.

Cheers,

[scdsuccess]

Re: A website that might change your life

Thanks for all the feedback guys.....

Well, I have jumped the gun....I do have the autoresponder installed on my site (the green block underneath it), but truly, I haven't even have a clue what and how to assign it......yet...that is.

I understand if you dont want to log in.

But for those who feel they dont want to log in, go to the next page where you will have access to the entire website.

http://www.urthemissingpiece.com/success_university_business_opportunity_introduction.html

Hope to hear more feedback.

And believe me, this is not a scheme.....lol....I am living proof of it, otherwise I wouldnt have put a picture of me on that site or my skype button.

Once again....thanks for all the feedback.

[David Marshall]

Re: A website that might change your life

pictures.

Hi,

i am viewing the site on firefox and the pictures at the top are slightly out of line, nothing major but you may want to have another look,

dave

[davidundalicia]

Re: A website that might change your life

Browsing through your pages, I noticed several spelling mistakes.....cant remember them all but trail stood out, should be trial.

[scdsuccess]

Re: A website that might change your life

Thanks for the notice on the spelling mistake David.

I appreciate it.

[davidundalicia]

Re: A website that might change your life

Your welcome..........we all miss the small details at times..............lol

[TWO CATS]

Re: A website that might change your life

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Took a look at other pages .Your video is not working or is it not done yet?
I found it was too much to read to go through it all .on these networking sites I like to know what it is and what it sells much sooner than that.(personal opinion only)Having said that the site looks great and everything other than video is working well.
good luck with it
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