Hooray! new site published

[deako4]

Well! this is the moment of truth, take a look at our new website and make comments of anything that might help us, looking forward to your feedback.

Deako4.

www.to-haveandtohold.com

[raganok]

Re: Hooray! new site published

i cant see nothing, it says server not found......

[D'son]

Re: Hooray! new site published

I see your site, a couple of things. First the page is untitled, second why have so much on one page. I looks like you just kept adding content as you thought of more. I would go back think about the site (one page does not constitute a site) there are several areas that could be seperated and expounded upon. I would try to improve the wedding photo, it is very pixilated. Lots of work to be done here, but nice idea and worth the effort. Good Luck.

[raganok]

Re: Hooray! new site published

Sorry still cant see the page maybe its my browser.....

[Lcoisas]

Re: Hooray! new site published

Hi raganok,

There is nothing wrong with your browser... is that de address goes to a link that is wrong (ends in .om / instead of .com)

Change it when popup opens, and you will be abble to see it.

[raganok]

Re: Hooray! new site published

Hi raganok,

There is nothing wrong with your browser... is that de address goes to a link that is wrong (ends in .om / instead of .com)

Change it when popup opens, and you will be abble to see it.

Thanks lcoisas
now i see the website
in my opinion its a nice site but i agree that its only one page sometimes for me its kind of boring to see one large page but its your idea i respect that
overall good information.....

[nzbr]

Re: Hooray! new site published

As mentioned above I also think you should have more than one page. And you have enough content for that. Why not creating a menu with the different people you have in your family that you talk about in your page?
Just an idea!

Cheers,

[jkadin]

Re: Hooray! new site published

first off the site is to much to gather at first think it like a book Ist page a intro 2page the story starts the third page story ends with a sale I wrote this way because you wrote a book so yu should understand.