OK I Am Ready For Your Brutal Critique!

[HomeBizGuy]

Hi There, I have been working on this site for several weeks and would really appreciate it if my fellow Blue Voda People would take a look and tell me what your impression is! Be Honest...I can take it...I hope!
My site is: http://www.Achieveit.Biz
My ID# is: 22306

Thanks for your time!
Russ Sutton, RN

[davidundalicia]

Re: OK I Am Ready For Your Brutal Critique!

Slick, well presented, and comes across with the message.

Tweak your top menus as they do not quite line up.

Now start to work on the seo side: You have far to many keywords.

Meta tags analysis.
Title: Title contains no errors.
This tag contains 30 characters.

Title relevancy to page content is excellent.
The Title relevancy to page content is 100%.

Description: Description meta tag contains no errors.
This tag contains 144 characters.

Description meta tag relevancy to page content is good.
The Description meta tag relevancy to page content is 75%.

Keywords: Keywords meta tag is too long.
This tag contains 2011 characters. This is too many for what we would consider a 'robot friendly' keywords tag. The maximum number of characters we recommend for this tag is 500.

Keywords meta tag contains too many keywords.
This tag contains 233 keywords. This is too many for what we would consider a 'robot friendly' keywords tag. The maximum number of keywords we recommend for this tag is 20.

Keywords meta tag relevancy to page content is poor.
The keywords meta tag relevancy to page content is 37%.

Author: The Author meta tag contains no errors.
This tag contains 11 characters.

[HomeBizGuy]

Re: OK I Am Ready For Your Brutal Critique!

WOW David!
Thank You so much for your input! I will fix my metatags right now.
BTW...for SEO...Do you have a easy video sitemap generator so I can submit this to Google?
Thanks again for your help!
Russ Sutton, RN

[davidundalicia]

Re: OK I Am Ready For Your Brutal Critique!

Use the one in your Bluevoda menu under tools............

David RE

[Karen Mac]

Re: OK I Am Ready For Your Brutal Critique!

Hmmm I seen Brutal and had to stop by...

Curious why you bothered to make a video about richrn.com then redirect them to this site? Either its this biz or its the rich rn biz? did richrn ever exist? If it did why redirect it to this? I would think the former would be easier and gather more traffic. If you did it as a cloaking thing.. google will smack you far harder than i ever would. If I be YOU id fix the video.. not refer to the other at all if possible.

Karen

[HomeBizGuy]

Re: OK I Am Ready For Your Brutal Critique!

Hi Karen
Thanks a bunch for your input! I have tried to change the url to richrn.com but haven't figured out how to do it yet. I would rather have richrn.com for this site...any suggestions?
Thank you for your honesty!
Russ Sutton, RN

[HomeBizGuy]

Re: OK I Am Ready For Your Brutal Critique!

Hello David,
I did not find the VIDEO site map under the tools bar...do I have the old edition? Is there any place I can get a video site map...that isn't too complicated?
Thank you for your patience and assistance!
Russ Sutton, RN

[Muzza]

Re: OK I Am Ready For Your Brutal Critique!

Sorry if I appear to be a party pooper but.....is it possible to cut your page width down to a 1000 so that we can get rid of the horizontal scrolling? That way you'll cater for 95% or more of your audience.

Also because I use dial-up, things happen a lot slower. Your site loaded with a sort of "water in a swimming pool" background which made the print unreadable. When I came back 30 seconds later a light blue background was starting to overlay the water image so I hung around. If I was an ordinary visitor who had just found your website, it would probably only taken me 10 seconds to decide I couldn't be bothered trying to read the blurb and would have moved on to find another site.

[HomeBizGuy]

Re: OK I Am Ready For Your Brutal Critique!

Hey,
Thanks for your input!
Russ

[Karen Mac]

Re: OK I Am Ready For Your Brutal Critique!

Hi Karen
Thanks a bunch for your input! I have tried to change the url to richrn.com but haven't figured out how to do it yet. I would rather have richrn.com for this site...any suggestions?
Thank you for your honesty!
Russ Sutton, RN

Do you own that domain? Then ADD it to your cpanel, publish your site there, login in to your domain registrar and Point the domain to your vodahosting..

Karen

[Collectors-info]

Re: OK I Am Ready For Your Brutal Critique!

Hi, ditto with the page width, you have it set at (width:1203px) & would be better around the 800/1000 mark.
Sorry to say that many of the pages are totally un-readable with fire fox with images & text overlapping..

Good luck.

[HomeBizGuy]

Re: OK I Am Ready For Your Brutal Critique!

Thanks Chris...not certian what to do about the overlapping problems with firefox? Any suggestions?
Thanks,
Russ

[davidundalicia]

Re: OK I Am Ready For Your Brutal Critique!

Re-arrange your text blocks using FF to check and the rest should be reasonable.

[Collectors-info]

Re: OK I Am Ready For Your Brutal Critique!

Hi, as David says is good. But also try keeping your text in one box as much as possible, & using tables in one block for your text works well.
IE: 1 column & 10 rows if needed.

[HomeBizGuy]

Re: OK I Am Ready For Your Brutal Critique!

Hi David,
Thanks for the info...how do I check with FF? Is this a download I need?
Completely foriegn stuff...again.
Thanks for your help!
Russ